for Percy Jackson The Dark Gamer6/19/2016 c5 Perc Lord of Earth and Shadows
I like the idea of the true child of chaos harem it has most of my favorite characters in it. Love the story so far looking forward to the next chapter and to see how the story is going to progress.
I like the idea of the true child of chaos harem it has most of my favorite characters in it. Love the story so far looking forward to the next chapter and to see how the story is going to progress.
6/19/2016 c4 Purple-fanfics-PJ
Consumption Absorption...MAKES HIM FREAKING NATSU! OMG! THIS IS TOTALLY WICKED! XD
Consumption Absorption...MAKES HIM FREAKING NATSU! OMG! THIS IS TOTALLY WICKED! XD
6/19/2016 c1 
1CrimsonMystic
I love this story a lot, but does it mean that the Undying Mortal will stop being updated!?
Honestly I like this one more, but the other one is still amazing and I would be really sad if it just finished with no real ending
1CrimsonMysticI love this story a lot, but does it mean that the Undying Mortal will stop being updated!?
Honestly I like this one more, but the other one is still amazing and I would be really sad if it just finished with no real ending
6/18/2016 c5 PewiGodOfAwesome
So Today I just realized who miss NIGHT most likely is and if it is who i think then i'm gonna feel stupid for taking this long to realize who it probably is, if its not then oh well.
So Today I just realized who miss NIGHT most likely is and if it is who i think then i'm gonna feel stupid for taking this long to realize who it probably is, if its not then oh well.
6/18/2016 c5 ShipMaster1960
Is Zoe going to be in the harem? As for the animal, make it a shapeshifter that can transform into any monster Percy has killed and is able to use their powers (give it a mental connection with Percy so even if it's never seen the thing Percy killed it can still see what to transform into).
Is Zoe going to be in the harem? As for the animal, make it a shapeshifter that can transform into any monster Percy has killed and is able to use their powers (give it a mental connection with Percy so even if it's never seen the thing Percy killed it can still see what to transform into).
6/18/2016 c5 Guest
Will anabeth be reborn in this world
Will anabeth be reborn in this world
6/18/2016 c5 vampwalker709
Ok first great chapter thanks for the update man second.
Please please please go with a sword like dragon slayer for percy
and let him eat the rest of that drake so he can
get the skills and stats from that thing.
Ok first great chapter thanks for the update man second.
Please please please go with a sword like dragon slayer for percy
and let him eat the rest of that drake so he can
get the skills and stats from that thing.
6/17/2016 c5 JackHawk
I love your stories, I started reading your stories when you started the "The True Child Of Chaos" story and I loved it. Now, the reason I made this review is because Gaia is acting a bit jealous of Percy but he did not tease her for it, like "awwww, are you jealous?" or "jealous that I can get in to a relationship" and it does not fit the story on the way he acts. You can't make him oblivious to all love, just make him tease Gaia a bit when she is angry (or sad) for Percy when he is talking about girls and love. Still love your stories though. :D
I love your stories, I started reading your stories when you started the "The True Child Of Chaos" story and I loved it. Now, the reason I made this review is because Gaia is acting a bit jealous of Percy but he did not tease her for it, like "awwww, are you jealous?" or "jealous that I can get in to a relationship" and it does not fit the story on the way he acts. You can't make him oblivious to all love, just make him tease Gaia a bit when she is angry (or sad) for Percy when he is talking about girls and love. Still love your stories though. :D
6/17/2016 c5 Guest
Let Percy tame a slime which evolves into a mimic slime! Would be funny if Percy called his slime to mimic some pretty woman and have sex with her only for Gaia to scream at him and him saying that this is a monster and it doesn't count. That aside, mimic slime seems like a pretty useful monster, being able to become his body double or maybe even provide Gaia a temporary body for awhile
Let Percy tame a slime which evolves into a mimic slime! Would be funny if Percy called his slime to mimic some pretty woman and have sex with her only for Gaia to scream at him and him saying that this is a monster and it doesn't count. That aside, mimic slime seems like a pretty useful monster, being able to become his body double or maybe even provide Gaia a temporary body for awhile