6/17/2016 c5 justafan
considering how massive the true child of chaos harem is then yes as long as you show percy actually spending time and such with them and percy is turning out like rance i love it so much one of the things i dont like was how percy didnt devour all that dragon stuff he could of used it to give his stats a much needed boost and i can guess one of gaias promises she will get from percy especially when he gives her a body and percys HP is massive i can only wonder how much MP he has and will percy ever gain a hp % regen skill i really hope so and wondering if there is beastmen there and if beast taming works on them i can see percy taming them in a different manner from the norm though hehe great chapter man.
considering how massive the true child of chaos harem is then yes as long as you show percy actually spending time and such with them and percy is turning out like rance i love it so much one of the things i dont like was how percy didnt devour all that dragon stuff he could of used it to give his stats a much needed boost and i can guess one of gaias promises she will get from percy especially when he gives her a body and percys HP is massive i can only wonder how much MP he has and will percy ever gain a hp % regen skill i really hope so and wondering if there is beastmen there and if beast taming works on them i can see percy taming them in a different manner from the norm though hehe great chapter man.
6/17/2016 c5 Guest
I have question ok, So when perce becomes older like 20 or something will he be in TCOC like the major cross dimensional fight scene if so then I am looking forward to the fight
I have question ok, So when perce becomes older like 20 or something will he be in TCOC like the major cross dimensional fight scene if so then I am looking forward to the fight
6/17/2016 c5 Lustful-Angel96
Great chapter, and yeah the true child of chaos harem should be in it with a few more women
Great chapter, and yeah the true child of chaos harem should be in it with a few more women
6/17/2016 c5 3L. Wolf123
This story is so freaking good. The plot is fluid and very well thought out. I am familiar with be server and I had a thought an a nine I think would flow well with the world you are creating is the magi the labyrinth and it's second season (I forget the name) it would flow super well and you could add a whole new race the fanalis (supper strong and supper fast born with abilities) but yeah that was my idea. You can use it or not but even at this stage you could easily write it in. If you want to use it but don't want to bother with the more overpowered charecter (i.e. the magi's) I can tell you all you need to know.
This story is so freaking good. The plot is fluid and very well thought out. I am familiar with be server and I had a thought an a nine I think would flow well with the world you are creating is the magi the labyrinth and it's second season (I forget the name) it would flow super well and you could add a whole new race the fanalis (supper strong and supper fast born with abilities) but yeah that was my idea. You can use it or not but even at this stage you could easily write it in. If you want to use it but don't want to bother with the more overpowered charecter (i.e. the magi's) I can tell you all you need to know.
6/17/2016 c5 Sirdishd
Percy should be taller, man I was 5'8" when I was 12 and he's only 5'1"?
Percy should be taller, man I was 5'8" when I was 12 and he's only 5'1"?
6/17/2016 c5 Cortax
Do I sense Hesta coming into play with the development of the two super powerful mages there? And I truly do want the harem from true child of chaos Gaia.
Do I sense Hesta coming into play with the development of the two super powerful mages there? And I truly do want the harem from true child of chaos Gaia.
6/15/2016 c4 yay day
gaia percy newawesome keep it going i love your stories and especialy this one!
gaia percy newawesome keep it going i love your stories and especialy this one!
6/15/2016 c1 Itsmehamza
New world nice. Different game/lvl up system double nice. Open world where we (or at least I ) don't know what to expect triple nice. Looking forward to what you think of.
Now I won't judge your grammar, spelling mistakes since my lvl is lower than a preschooler but I will criticize you if you at some point make this story too fast paced or to slow and just make a bad arc but, for now nice start.
New world nice. Different game/lvl up system double nice. Open world where we (or at least I ) don't know what to expect triple nice. Looking forward to what you think of.
Now I won't judge your grammar, spelling mistakes since my lvl is lower than a preschooler but I will criticize you if you at some point make this story too fast paced or to slow and just make a bad arc but, for now nice start.