5/20/2016 c1 9thearizona
Hmmm, interesting start. I would like to know the background though. Who are these guardians and what excactly happened in the cave? Though I bet the next chapter will be like a flash back right? Well I hope it is. Sooooo, watch the Alien movies much? Cause Hiccups death looks very familiar to a certain death in Aliens(?[im not so good with the alien movies]). His death didnt make as sad as some almost deaths have, I guess cause it was so quick and not much time was spent on it. It's an honor to know my reviews mean that much, but really it's the fantastic stories you are writing. I will wait for however long it takes for an update.
Until next time,
Keep up the super amazing work!

5/20/2016 c1 Retrokill
LOL. Glad you wait for these, reviews;especially from regulars always brighten up an author's day!. School getting in the way, totally understand. I've got to tutor my brother for his exams...

Anyway back to the review..
Guardians? What are those ? Are they dragons or some mystic beings...Apart from the slightly confusing introduction to the fic, I don't see anything wrong with it. However, I have noticed that the more recent fics you've released are pretty dark or gore-y if you will...Not that I have a problem with it, it's a change from all the emotional stuff I've somehow gone into reading and it is a good change. It's just...how do I put it...dark? I don't know what the word I'm looking for is..eh whatever...But I still like it...

Here's some advice for you...Don't stress yourself out writing multiple fics at once just set a comfortable pace for yourself, write out one fic's chapters and get a Beta for you to check it they help a lot. Release the chapters on a schedule while you work on personal stuff and/or your on the chapters for your next fic. So remember just be comfortable with what your doing.

-Retro out-