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5/22/2016 c1 flamingsword108
Chiho? a bishop?
Hmmmm how will she be strong enough. If you are trying to use sekirei characters, make akitsu a bishopp. Magic boosted with ice powers is epic. Yume is light magic based, Bishop is also better for her than rook. For rook strength based sekirei like benni mutsu musubi etc. Yasima is gravity based and could be a cool rook. While haveing sekirei in his peerage is cool, this is a crossover so get some dxd people in it, maybe some youkai (can be OC's like a kyuubi or nekomata) maybe an extra devil... lots of cool things. That being said add kazehana cause she is not ony hot but sinergizes with uzume. And she is hot. Add her. For sure
5/21/2016 c1 Guest
I think you slipped into your eva story at the end "Save Musubi and I accept your offer, Shinji-sama." unless Hawk had a quick namechange. :P
5/21/2016 c1 Scorez
Highly enjoyable, keep up the good work!
5/20/2016 c1 Guest
Maybe Yume should be a rook after all Rosewviesa(I don't know how to spell her name) has a lot magical attacks and she's a rook. Also I haven't decided if I like this fanfiction yet maybe next chapter.
5/20/2016 c1 FateBurn
Good start, and I would like to see Rossweisse in his peerage from DxD, and Yahan from Sekirei, as for which piece to use on Yume I dont really know it would depend more on who the other members will be coz either is a good fit for Yume.
5/20/2016 c1 22edboy4926
Good intro.
Looking forward to more.
Yume should be a rook.
Akitsu should be part of the peerage/harem.
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