for A week's worth2/3/2018 c1 Azarune
Now that was a fascinating read. I really enjoyed it and am really bummed, but understanding why it didn't continue. I like the open endedness that your ending had, giving me to think of the perfect ending for the psycho Dorito Chip. I suppose the thing that makes me sad the most is that Poor Bill and Will have everyone they know and care about forget about them. But can't have everything. going to give this one a fav and you a follow. Best wishes!
Now that was a fascinating read. I really enjoyed it and am really bummed, but understanding why it didn't continue. I like the open endedness that your ending had, giving me to think of the perfect ending for the psycho Dorito Chip. I suppose the thing that makes me sad the most is that Poor Bill and Will have everyone they know and care about forget about them. But can't have everything. going to give this one a fav and you a follow. Best wishes!
2/12/2017 c1 
11socialgirl378
This is a pretty damn good story. Though I feel bad that their fates are still close yet so far. I'm guessing in Mabel's past, instead of Ford coming out of the portal, it was that bastard demon who took her family's lives.
11socialgirl378This is a pretty damn good story. Though I feel bad that their fates are still close yet so far. I'm guessing in Mabel's past, instead of Ford coming out of the portal, it was that bastard demon who took her family's lives.
8/18/2016 c1 jaminjess8
Oh my god... just woah... that was so amazing! understand that you think a sequel would ruin the ending which i totally get but I'm so left wanting more! lol It was so amazing! Your writing style made me read every word and it was sooooo good! Please consider making a sequel though its ultimately up to you so do what you feel is right. And now you have gained someone who loves reading your work either way :D Keep up the amazing work and talent!
Oh my god... just woah... that was so amazing! understand that you think a sequel would ruin the ending which i totally get but I'm so left wanting more! lol It was so amazing! Your writing style made me read every word and it was sooooo good! Please consider making a sequel though its ultimately up to you so do what you feel is right. And now you have gained someone who loves reading your work either way :D Keep up the amazing work and talent!
5/26/2016 c1 PsychoSaw
THIS WAS AMAZING! SO WELL WRITTEN! I actually started tearing up at some parts ESPECIALLY NEAR THE END! YES, PLEASE MAKE A SEQUAL WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE TO!
THIS WAS AMAZING! SO WELL WRITTEN! I actually started tearing up at some parts ESPECIALLY NEAR THE END! YES, PLEASE MAKE A SEQUAL WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE TO!
5/23/2016 c1 Shadowmoonhunter
ToT oh my god you are wonderful
ToT oh my god you are wonderful
5/21/2016 c1 16time2dancecpj
This is my new favorite story! It's so well written start to finish! That ending was so beautiful!
16time2dancecpjThis is my new favorite story! It's so well written start to finish! That ending was so beautiful!
5/21/2016 c1 Guest
So long yet so good. I just want to know if Ford will actually be coming from the portal, if you write a sequel
So long yet so good. I just want to know if Ford will actually be coming from the portal, if you write a sequel
5/21/2016 c1 Guest
Oh my gosh, this story was AMAZING! Even though it was long, I don't care, it was so good! I never expected the ending, it was just, ugh, amazing!
Oh my gosh, this story was AMAZING! Even though it was long, I don't care, it was so good! I never expected the ending, it was just, ugh, amazing!