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11/3/2016 c7 Jo
Afdgjkcukykg new chapter! Excitement overload! Heh: "that no Revy can't feel up her ass." actually giggle-snorted at this, but in the end I was damn proud that our guurl Revy was stubborn and managed to 'tap dat ass' literally !:'D Also, loved her frustrated moments and "hate you, f*ck you" comments, 'cause yeah, Revy doesn't even process 'emotional' normally, it's like she just has a shortcut to 'angry' immediately. Can't help but feel that the ending was a bit abrupt, there could've been another chap. about the finale as you call it "full frontal B", buttt it's your story and all I can say it has been a fantastic ride! (also can't wait for new fics concerning B, you know who's gonna read that shit in an instant:D)
11/3/2016 c7 30demonicDRAMAqueen
That's exactly my theory of her childish behaviour. Yay.

On the other hand thank God these two resolved their issues. XD can't wait for more from you. I loved The voices you used for either of them. it was in character and Revy's thoughts were typically angsty in a funny way.
11/3/2016 c7 16AddictedFangirl101
I love this story. That's all there is to it.
11/2/2016 c7 92BloodyDemon666
This was a good story and thanks for the closure, I can't wait to see what you write next...keep me informed of your future Black Lagoon projects.
10/25/2016 c1 Guest
It's been a month, man I hope you aren't abandoning this...
10/25/2016 c6 16AddictedFangirl101
Holy shit, holy fuck'en shit...how did I just come across this now!
The part in the first chapter where Revy was wondering what Mofia Queens talk about "she had little idea what the Mofia boss liked to converse about. Guns? Death? Porn editing?"
Arhhh! I can relate so damn much to RevyXD The flow of this story is also perfect, you captured the rough uncut uncensored place that Roanaper is and the mannerisms of the people in it. Totally right in the fact that ole 'Laika may have long spidery fingers but bruh...those nails just aint doing it:p Hope to see this piece updated soon.

Thanks for the mention by the way, super flattered.
9/23/2016 c6 Jo
Hahahah awwwww man, you got me blushing over here, I'm really glad that my support and comments help, 'cause this story deserves all the praise it gets:D The giddiness that precedes the reading of the new chap. is unreal, aaaand we're getting to the steamy stuff mhmm yeah! (Also Revy's comment 'bout them pink talons , lol'd)
9/22/2016 c6 Luna del Desierto
Nice chapter! Thanks for sharing and keep it up!
9/22/2016 c6 92BloodyDemon666
This was really good, can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work!
8/29/2016 c5 Jo
Did I tell you , how you freakin' nail them every time? Well, I'm saying it again, 'cause you really do! Even though I expected violence from the previous chapter to continue I actually prefer the subdued tone of this one. Continual anger would be Revy's thing, but not B's. 'Cause we all know that she is way more mature (and quite a bit older) than our dearest Two Hands, it made sense that she would cool out after the argument. (That's why I really liked lines like "Eyeing a strand of hair that stuck to the gunwoman's cheek, Balalaika gave a tired smirk that deepened her crow's feet.")

P.s. I think it's yayTsa, not yaySta, but it could be just a typo :)
8/30/2016 c5 Luna del Desierto
Stop being a b*tch, Balalaika, and make Revvy yours!
Thanks for sharing!
8/30/2016 c5 BloodyDemon666
I really enjoyed this and I hope to read more, keep up the good work!
8/19/2016 c4 Jo
Hell yeeesss! Damn, this was perfection ,their every reaction was nailed, and I really, really liked that last line of Revy's!
8/19/2016 c4 30demonicDRAMAqueen
Yes...Yes! MWAHAHAHAAAA Revy and Laika can keep skirting around the topic for all I care. I don't want your writing to end
EVER... XD
8/19/2016 c4 92BloodyDemon666
Oh, I can't wait to see how this goes next, keep it going!
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