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6/9/2016 c1 1KuroKapibara
Ok, the one who threw that book will have to deal with me!... haha kidding, that was hilarious. What was not hilarious was the rest of the chapter. exept for tachikawa's comments. Anyway, that was so sad and sweet. We never got to really see how the death of his mother affected Jin, I think is something he should talk about in the manga. oh oh like Jin trying to comfort Yuuma by telling him about his mother and in return Yuuma talking about his father. awww such brotherly moment.
But yeah. Don't worry Jin, you will gain a new one,a crazy odd one, but you will be happy. Heart-whelming story with much feels, couldn't ask for more. bye!
5/25/2016 c1 43Ri-Ryn
Okay, that hurt. This poor elite isn't allowed to be happy, is he? Not that I'm doing much as a writer to fix that... Your writing is clear as always and enjoyable, I love every piece you publish! Keep it up. (I wonder who threw the book, though? I keep think Kazama-san...missed, I guess?)

Ri-Ryn

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