for An Unexpected Family8/7/2023 c13 Guest
And Evelyn and the captives gotta rebel against shredder and stockman
And Evelyn and the captives gotta rebel against shredder and stockman
8/7/2023 c13 Guest
Another chapter Please! The turtles and splinter have to save Evelyn and fast!
Another chapter Please! The turtles and splinter have to save Evelyn and fast!
1/27/2017 c13 kate
heya! good chapter! ive probably said this in the chat, but you said to review, so. i like where youre going with the plot! it feels like things are coming to a head. exciting stuff! and the introduction of new characters is great, does a lot to keep it interesting. i can't believe ur so close to being done...
and btw it was rly fun beta-ing for you :D
10/10 would do again
heya! good chapter! ive probably said this in the chat, but you said to review, so. i like where youre going with the plot! it feels like things are coming to a head. exciting stuff! and the introduction of new characters is great, does a lot to keep it interesting. i can't believe ur so close to being done...
and btw it was rly fun beta-ing for you :D
10/10 would do again
12/10/2016 c12 MegMoo
Oooooo! Exciting! Great to have you back at your best SN; but, oh what a tease you are with these awesome cliffies. Update again soon!
Oooooo! Exciting! Great to have you back at your best SN; but, oh what a tease you are with these awesome cliffies. Update again soon!
12/5/2016 c12 kate
rly good chapter! it was kinda refreshing to hear the story from another characters perspective, and the insight into the lives of the mutants? soldiers? was cool. and the way the two plotlines sorta wove together at the end when evelyn appeared was clever. i really enjoyed it!
also, completely unrelated but can you text me your fav flower? please and thank you
rly good chapter! it was kinda refreshing to hear the story from another characters perspective, and the insight into the lives of the mutants? soldiers? was cool. and the way the two plotlines sorta wove together at the end when evelyn appeared was clever. i really enjoyed it!
also, completely unrelated but can you text me your fav flower? please and thank you
12/5/2016 c12 RosesandThorns666
Great chapter again hun! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed it sooner. Been working as usual ;) I'm super excited for the next one :D Keep up the good work! Xx
Great chapter again hun! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed it sooner. Been working as usual ;) I'm super excited for the next one :D Keep up the good work! Xx
10/24/2016 c10 MegMoo
I like how you are using Leatherhead - oh and of course I adore Stockman and Karai; great characters! Liking how Ev has powers - can't wait to see her use them.
I like how you are using Leatherhead - oh and of course I adore Stockman and Karai; great characters! Liking how Ev has powers - can't wait to see her use them.
10/24/2016 c9 MegMoo
Splinter is so lovely. Maybe he would adopt me...if he were real... Anywho, great chappie. I'm loving the storyline and actually it is nice that the guys see her as a sister. Yes I love my 'romantic' stories and as you know I am planning on hooking Leo up with my OC...but, it is refreshing to have a different angle. Friendship and family is so special.
Splinter is so lovely. Maybe he would adopt me...if he were real... Anywho, great chappie. I'm loving the storyline and actually it is nice that the guys see her as a sister. Yes I love my 'romantic' stories and as you know I am planning on hooking Leo up with my OC...but, it is refreshing to have a different angle. Friendship and family is so special.
10/24/2016 c8 MegMoo
Whoa! This is so exciting! Loving it. If that horrid man hurts her though it'll be me nailing him!
Whoa! This is so exciting! Loving it. If that horrid man hurts her though it'll be me nailing him!
10/24/2016 c7 MegMoo
The ending wasn't crappy. It is nice to see just 'normal' day to day things and I think her reaction with Mikey was powerful enough, poor little sweetheart. I really feel so sorry for her but glad she has the guys and Splinter now.
The ending wasn't crappy. It is nice to see just 'normal' day to day things and I think her reaction with Mikey was powerful enough, poor little sweetheart. I really feel so sorry for her but glad she has the guys and Splinter now.
10/24/2016 c6 MegMoo
Great chapter. I love this story! Love Evelyn, she's such a great character; she's a survivor.
Great chapter. I love this story! Love Evelyn, she's such a great character; she's a survivor.