2/4 c4 Luvreading67
If Bella is only nearly 18, Josh is nearly 5 he can’t be her child, can he, that would make her only 13? When he was born, there is more to that story

2/4 c1 Luvreading67
It’s a great start, Edward not getting what he wants immediately is a bonus,,,
does Bella and her brothers ages come into this, or Edwards too, he is obviously an adult,

7/13/2021 c23 Luvreading67
Smashing story
Hope you recovered well..

7/13/2021 c11 Luvreading67
Ignore ignorant people who tell you rubbish,,as you say,,don’t like don’t read,,why people make derogatory comments is beyond me...
As a newish fan fiction reader, I like 99% of the stories I read, I comment, but mostly about the storyline, not how it is written,,
Hope you keep up,you’re writing and don’t get too entangled in self doubt..

7/13/2021 c5 Luvreading67
I liked it from the first few lines,,
Looking forward to reading more

6/26/2021 c23 28Rebadams7
Go get your lifeBella!
R

6/23/2021 c23 BridieM
So pleased Bella was strong. Wonderful chapter. Thank you for writing

6/21/2021 c23 pipelynn
Good riddance!