for How I Failed To Avoid The Plot3/20 c1 Sharbolis
i love how the comments are "please continueme like" and then just "what a fucking bitch die in a hole"
i love how the comments are "please continueme like" and then just "what a fucking bitch die in a hole"
10/15/2024 c28 nickvan2024
Please keep writing this. It’s really funny how he keeps trying to avoid the plot and keep getting screwed over. It’s really funny.
Please keep writing this. It’s really funny how he keeps trying to avoid the plot and keep getting screwed over. It’s really funny.
7/8/2024 c28 Roarroar
Just here to comment that this was a fun read and didn't become a bad read. Cause' seriously, from the title alone, I'm already coming in expecting a not-so-serious fanfic. I got what I wanted. You diverting the story all over makes it more interesting, especially with all the weird roles Chris got into. Good work.
Roar!
Just here to comment that this was a fun read and didn't become a bad read. Cause' seriously, from the title alone, I'm already coming in expecting a not-so-serious fanfic. I got what I wanted. You diverting the story all over makes it more interesting, especially with all the weird roles Chris got into. Good work.
Roar!
5/2/2024 c3 
1VincentFS
Fucking hell, such a little bitch, dude. You’ve made me genuinely wish your protagonist would fucking die already. I don’t know whether to be impressed or toss this story in a shit pile and forget about it.
1VincentFSFucking hell, such a little bitch, dude. You’ve made me genuinely wish your protagonist would fucking die already. I don’t know whether to be impressed or toss this story in a shit pile and forget about it.
6/9/2023 c15 Lord.shasta
Holy shit. Every time I get to another chapter, I think "this MC can't possibly get more annoying". And every time I am wrong. This writing style just absolutely screams 16 year old "I'm so quirky" girl.
Holy shit. Every time I get to another chapter, I think "this MC can't possibly get more annoying". And every time I am wrong. This writing style just absolutely screams 16 year old "I'm so quirky" girl.
4/23/2023 c28 Guest
Why do I get the feeling that when Roman dies Neo is going to latch on to Chris?
Why do I get the feeling that when Roman dies Neo is going to latch on to Chris?
4/10/2023 c10 Guest
what a pile of trash.
what a pile of trash.
1/18/2023 c2 allblushingmalemcarecucks
The talking to the readers for of writing is the worst one there is. It is way to disconnected and doesn't make you feel like you are in that story. But some one bad at telling stories telling you about it...
The talking to the readers for of writing is the worst one there is. It is way to disconnected and doesn't make you feel like you are in that story. But some one bad at telling stories telling you about it...
10/5/2022 c15 theMAX360
This has got to be the most annoying fanfic I've ever read, jesus christ. please tone it down on the inner monologues, and how for chris to stop being a pussy.
This has got to be the most annoying fanfic I've ever read, jesus christ. please tone it down on the inner monologues, and how for chris to stop being a pussy.