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6/12/2016 c2 10GingerRogers15
No please don't say you fail at this! I loved the way you described the frozen decay it gave me chills. You wrote excellent descriptions of the everlasting chill of Helcaraxe and I liked how in the end you split the elves into houses of Gondolin :) this is really good, and keep up the good work! You're doing great
6/1/2016 c2 73Jesus' girl 4ever
How did any of them survive this?
5/28/2016 c1 10GingerRogers15
Thank you so much for writing this! It is already off to a great start. The point of view of a child forced to grow up quickly is excellent, for it raises interesting questions about is he included in the Doom of Mandos too, and the tragedy of the child losing his family just adds to the pain and horror of the Crossing. I love how you described the ice bridge as death innocently cloaked in white- a chilling description. I'm very excited to read more, keep up the good work!
5/28/2016 c1 73Jesus' girl 4ever
Wow...That's about all I've got to say.

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