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6/29/2016 c2 6sparklybutterfly42
'The cogs of his world were oiled by blood, sweat and tears' WOW
Your writing in this chapter was GORGEOUS! Like seriously. It was really poetic and powerful. The phrasing was beautiful. I really felt it. Great job!
6/22/2016 c1 sparklybutterfly42
Whoa! So good! I absolutely love the darker side if the hetalia fandom. Sure the show is funny, but if you think about these characters just imagine all they've gone through. Think of all the wars and the coups and the revolutions. All the assassinations and genocides and revolts. Every country has horror in its past and these nations feel that. It wraps and twists them. I really love how you portrayed Oliver as the dark side of England. And yet even so he sacrifices so much to keep Arthur alive and well.
This is really powerful. So dark and sad but that's probably my favorite type of hetalia fanfiction. Really well done!
6/18/2016 c1 1AzaleaTea
I'm enjoying this so far. It'd be interesting to get Arthur's opinion on Oliver on later chapters. I'd say that both Italy and his 2p counterpart are pretty good subjects to write on next.

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