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7/18/2016 c9 1LeParapluie
Do you want me to cry chienne do you have fun whispering torture into my ears? Is this punishment somehow? sorella you hurt me dearly do not say ducking "Yay!" when you see me writing do you wanna fight
6/19/2016 c4 11silentwolf111
This is a really interesting story so far; nice job! Your writing is very good, and I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
6/10/2016 c3 Krouel
Matthew and Alfred's argument, tho.
6/10/2016 c3 Mikkimaki
So far this is quite the interesting story! A quick critique though- you may want to exchange Quelle with Quoi. They mean essentially the same thing, however Quelle can be considered a 'sentence starter' whereas Quoi stands on its own. Therefore, saying 'What?' on its own would be 'Quoi?' (Quoi? Versus Quelle chose as-to dis?). If you do plan to use more French I suggest using or other better resources, or feel free to ask me/other people reading (I speak French as well).
5/31/2016 c1 Krouel
This is interesting, I like it. Hope you have the will to update, because this got me wanting for more.
5/30/2016 c1 lissale03
Has the potential to be a great story! I can't wait to see what happens!
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