8/6/2018 c6 Deadsquall
hey good job I don't hunk most of he's other reviews get how strong a 1st class SOLDIER is plus naruto hadn't had a serious fight in over 3 years so he'd be rusty plus they both make it clear they didn't use everything as it would be more destructive. anyways I have greatly enjoyed this so far, keep it up
hey good job I don't hunk most of he's other reviews get how strong a 1st class SOLDIER is plus naruto hadn't had a serious fight in over 3 years so he'd be rusty plus they both make it clear they didn't use everything as it would be more destructive. anyways I have greatly enjoyed this so far, keep it up
11/30/2017 c4 Guest
I'm a little confused on how strong naruto ,in chapter 4 you made him sound afraid of being between kyuubi and juubis strength so is he nerfed compared to his post war self ?
I'm a little confused on how strong naruto ,in chapter 4 you made him sound afraid of being between kyuubi and juubis strength so is he nerfed compared to his post war self ?
11/26/2017 c6 3doraemax
Wow... just wow. This story has moved to the top of my list of Naruto/FFVII story. Particularly liked how you integrate personal well of power and magic (ie not everything run on materia bit). Looking forward to where you'll bring this story. If the current chapter is how SOLDIER 1st Class run... i am really really excited to see how Sephiroth do.
Wow... just wow. This story has moved to the top of my list of Naruto/FFVII story. Particularly liked how you integrate personal well of power and magic (ie not everything run on materia bit). Looking forward to where you'll bring this story. If the current chapter is how SOLDIER 1st Class run... i am really really excited to see how Sephiroth do.
11/20/2017 c6 OllyOllyOxycodone
This was entertaining up until this chapter. You have a post war Naruto, using Kurama even, STRUGGLING to beat a 1st class SOLDIER... Why not use a younger/weaker version of Naruto if you want him to have a challenge and add tension to the fights. Not a Naruto who is able to destroy the goddamn moon.
This was entertaining up until this chapter. You have a post war Naruto, using Kurama even, STRUGGLING to beat a 1st class SOLDIER... Why not use a younger/weaker version of Naruto if you want him to have a challenge and add tension to the fights. Not a Naruto who is able to destroy the goddamn moon.
10/12/2017 c6 Guest
Just fucking kill yourself, you can't write for shit, so don't!
Just fucking kill yourself, you can't write for shit, so don't!
10/7/2017 c5 1iysa
Did you really have to nerf him that bad? I mean sure it's okay to nerf him but serzly you're claiming to use 4yrs after war naruto. Even nerfed to half his power would decimate Runa.
Awesome story you have here. Don't lose us by over-nerfing out of reason or explanation.
Did you really have to nerf him that bad? I mean sure it's okay to nerf him but serzly you're claiming to use 4yrs after war naruto. Even nerfed to half his power would decimate Runa.
Awesome story you have here. Don't lose us by over-nerfing out of reason or explanation.
10/6/2017 c2 2Chrisfragger
I am not criticizing your writing chops here, you are fine on that count.
What level of Naruto are we talking here? Because trained or not, no "Non chakra" using human should have any ghost of a chance against Hikage Naruto? I mean I know you want to do something to cripple him... But eh, it's not fun.
This Naruto can crush MOUNTAINS with his bare hands.
I am not criticizing your writing chops here, you are fine on that count.
What level of Naruto are we talking here? Because trained or not, no "Non chakra" using human should have any ghost of a chance against Hikage Naruto? I mean I know you want to do something to cripple him... But eh, it's not fun.
This Naruto can crush MOUNTAINS with his bare hands.