for The Dance is not over4/20 c60 Kalstorm99
Great chapter! I'm excited to see what Alyn will do next on his wacky adventure, and who the Blacks and Greens will be at war with, in the coming days.
Great chapter! I'm excited to see what Alyn will do next on his wacky adventure, and who the Blacks and Greens will be at war with, in the coming days.
4/19 c60 Guest
Nice chapter.
Nice chapter.
3/1 c58 Paul
Iron Bank intrigue, mixed farce and tragedy in the invasion of the Vale, and Yi Ti making magnificent debut all make for a good chapter, but I feel like banging my head against the wall at the mention of a century of war at the beginning. I am suspecting be a grandfather by the time this story finishes.
Iron Bank intrigue, mixed farce and tragedy in the invasion of the Vale, and Yi Ti making magnificent debut all make for a good chapter, but I feel like banging my head against the wall at the mention of a century of war at the beginning. I am suspecting be a grandfather by the time this story finishes.
2/26 c19 
1UzuShiro
Anda. No es posible que Baela la hija de Daemon se casara con alguien sabiendo que su hermano está vivo y puede casarse con el para mantener la pureza de su sangre.
1UzuShiroAnda. No es posible que Baela la hija de Daemon se casara con alguien sabiendo que su hermano está vivo y puede casarse con el para mantener la pureza de su sangre.
2/24 c59 Kalstorm99
Awesome chapter! I'm curious to see how the war will grow in the coming chapters.
Awesome chapter! I'm curious to see how the war will grow in the coming chapters.
11/5/2024 c58 Guest
Everything looks like we are soon going to see a Battle of Gulltown. Braavosi allied corsairs amassing to pursue the treasure ship and conveying to Gulltown were they will be met by the newly arrived reinforcements and the new idea of this Alchemist.
Everything looks like we are soon going to see a Battle of Gulltown. Braavosi allied corsairs amassing to pursue the treasure ship and conveying to Gulltown were they will be met by the newly arrived reinforcements and the new idea of this Alchemist.
11/3/2024 c1 Guest
how can small arrows from a bow cause damage to wings if according to books even a volley from scorpions did little damage to membranes and fingers of dragons wings, i don’t understand if they were poisoned it would be more logical or moondancer herself attacked wings using advantages in speed, maneuverability and weather such as rain, fog, strong wind, attacking from position of sun so that it would blind but strangest option was chosen to win.
how can small arrows from a bow cause damage to wings if according to books even a volley from scorpions did little damage to membranes and fingers of dragons wings, i don’t understand if they were poisoned it would be more logical or moondancer herself attacked wings using advantages in speed, maneuverability and weather such as rain, fog, strong wind, attacking from position of sun so that it would blind but strangest option was chosen to win.
11/4/2024 c58 Kalstorm99
Awesome chapter! I'm quite excited to see how all of the moving parts will continue to escalate the War of the Beard.
Awesome chapter! I'm quite excited to see how all of the moving parts will continue to escalate the War of the Beard.
9/4/2024 c1 7raw666
Interesting, and I wonder what you plan.
Though, I will not say I am at my seats edge. If I am being honest, I hope to see the Weaver Option or you continuing Let the Galaxy Burn with Westeoss in space.
7raw666Interesting, and I wonder what you plan.
Though, I will not say I am at my seats edge. If I am being honest, I hope to see the Weaver Option or you continuing Let the Galaxy Burn with Westeoss in space.
6/18/2024 c56 raw666
Keep up the excellent work. Really wish I had more to add but waiting to see the next chapter to give a full opinion.
Keep up the excellent work. Really wish I had more to add but waiting to see the next chapter to give a full opinion.
6/16/2024 c56 Guest
Good chapter.
Good chapter.
4/7/2024 c55 17militaryhistory
I like how Hightower is actually right about what caused the storm that wrecked the Braavosi fleet but is completely wrong about who it was that caused. Nice twist.
17militaryhistoryI like how Hightower is actually right about what caused the storm that wrecked the Braavosi fleet but is completely wrong about who it was that caused. Nice twist.