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5/31/2016 c1 Guest
I would suggest having someone help look over your chapters. I had trouble reading your sentences. Like you said at the top, your grammar isn't that great, as such it can make it distracting for a reader. You will receive more reviews follows and favorites if you can improve your grammar.

I always get excited for new secret trio stories, so I hope you continue and try to improve your grammar so that it will be an even more enjoyable story to read.

Best of luck!

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