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7/6/2017 c1 25Link Fangirl01
OOOOOOHH I like this a whole lot! It's believable that Harry could make the house cross dimensions if he was in enough distress, and boy did that sound like distress. I can also see Rita going postal on a fat child abuser because while she's a cactus, she's a cactus with a heart. She'd make such an awesome mom for a magical prodigy like Harry.

I really really REALLY hope this gets continued.
7/14/2016 c1 3grither55
Cool story, I liked chapter one. I enjoyed Rita's character.
6/12/2016 c1 5SonicAnime2010
2 noticable errors on this chapter.. number one, this is kinda important because it goes by the Tales of Vesperia canon, technically Rita wasn't a member of that guild. She mainly helped out because their goals coincided... second, minor spelling, but its "Tractor Beam" not "Tracker Beam", now onto the story...I've seen worse but there's a plot hole in how only Harry and Vernon wind up in Terca Lumieres
5/31/2016 c1 10ultima-owner
interesting place for the house to end up

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