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6/3/2016 c1 9mattgerrard
This is EXCELLENT! I've always wondered how to write EDI and I think you captured her perfectly, both in tone and thought process. Thank you for writing this !
6/2/2016 c1 37Vorcha Girl
I really enjoyed this! Seeing EDI struggle with her emotions and try to logically figure them out was something I haven't seen before. Awesome job!
6/2/2016 c1 20MizDirected
Very interesting look at things from EDI's POV. Her struggle to figure out what was going on with her and her conclusions put a marvelous, fine point on the issue. Great stuff.
6/2/2016 c1 33theherocomplex
Oh, damn, this is excellent. EDI's perspective is a fascinating one, and you did a great job showing the more technical (is that a pun? Heh) aspects of her development. Lovely piece!
6/2/2016 c1 20MosaicCreme
I loved it! I love seeing the internal processes of EDI as she worked through coming to the realization that she was angry, and wished to cause (or see caused) harm to Henry Lawson. It's a beautiful awakening. EDI will always be one of my favorite characters. Good work!

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