for The Dutchman's Beauty5/30 c2 Hailee
Hmm I Can See Charolette Growing Up On The Dutchman And Learning How To
Assist The Mates And If You Do A Part 2 To This Story Maybe Her Mother Thinks She's Lost
At Sea And Doesnt Know About It I Can See That Happening
Hmm I Can See Charolette Growing Up On The Dutchman And Learning How To
Assist The Mates And If You Do A Part 2 To This Story Maybe Her Mother Thinks She's Lost
At Sea And Doesnt Know About It I Can See That Happening
8/2/2020 c2 AmbrosiaMermaid
This is intriguing, Charlotte is an interesting girl who I‘m interested in seeing how she grows. I love that you added more names of the crew even though it’s not as important yet I like that you didn’t give them Too much details- enough to pull me as the reader amongst the crew! Your story telling good and I want to know how it goes on, Please keep up the creatively good work with your story!
This is intriguing, Charlotte is an interesting girl who I‘m interested in seeing how she grows. I love that you added more names of the crew even though it’s not as important yet I like that you didn’t give them Too much details- enough to pull me as the reader amongst the crew! Your story telling good and I want to know how it goes on, Please keep up the creatively good work with your story!
6/23/2017 c2 
20Brookie Twiling
I like Charlotte, she's sweet. I wonder if, maybe, she'll leave, become a pirate and end up back there in, say, 10 years?
Good story, I like it!
20Brookie TwilingI like Charlotte, she's sweet. I wonder if, maybe, she'll leave, become a pirate and end up back there in, say, 10 years?
Good story, I like it!
5/30/2017 c2 3Black Moons Daughter
I like it very much! The idea of a girl aboard the Flying Dutchman is quite new and refreshing, though I am a bit confused about the category of your story... Okay the adventure, but the romance? Between whom exactly? She can't have romance yet, she is eight! So who?
3Black Moons DaughterI like it very much! The idea of a girl aboard the Flying Dutchman is quite new and refreshing, though I am a bit confused about the category of your story... Okay the adventure, but the romance? Between whom exactly? She can't have romance yet, she is eight! So who?
6/8/2016 c1 DinoDino16
Love this! Please keep it up. Very descriptive. Felt like I was there and I was really into it.
Love this! Please keep it up. Very descriptive. Felt like I was there and I was really into it.