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5/30 c2 Hailee
Hmm I Can See Charolette Growing Up On The Dutchman And Learning How To
Assist The Mates And If You Do A Part 2 To This Story Maybe Her Mother Thinks She's Lost
At Sea And Doesnt Know About It I Can See That Happening
8/2/2020 c2 AmbrosiaMermaid
This is intriguing, Charlotte is an interesting girl who I‘m interested in seeing how she grows. I love that you added more names of the crew even though it’s not as important yet I like that you didn’t give them Too much details- enough to pull me as the reader amongst the crew! Your story telling good and I want to know how it goes on, Please keep up the creatively good work with your story!
2/15/2020 c2 2acetwolf94
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
10/28/2017 c2 mated-to-a-yautja
Update please
6/23/2017 c2 20Brookie Twiling
I like Charlotte, she's sweet. I wonder if, maybe, she'll leave, become a pirate and end up back there in, say, 10 years?

Good story, I like it!
5/30/2017 c2 3Black Moons Daughter
I like it very much! The idea of a girl aboard the Flying Dutchman is quite new and refreshing, though I am a bit confused about the category of your story... Okay the adventure, but the romance? Between whom exactly? She can't have romance yet, she is eight! So who?
10/2/2016 c2 11SageTheAsonbakw
I like your story! So far it's great! :D
6/8/2016 c1 DinoDino16
Love this! Please keep it up. Very descriptive. Felt like I was there and I was really into it.

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