for What She is to Be5/9/2020 c6 
11BowieQueen
I definitely need a cold shower. Fark that was hot. There is something hot about getting smut from Jareth's perspective hehe. Well done :)
11BowieQueenI definitely need a cold shower. Fark that was hot. There is something hot about getting smut from Jareth's perspective hehe. Well done :)
5/9/2020 c5 BowieQueen
Had a busy mother's day here so only just getting a chance to review. Interesting seeing it from Sarah's perspective. You did well don't worry.
Also I hope you have had a few more readers come your way after I shared your story :)
Had a busy mother's day here so only just getting a chance to review. Interesting seeing it from Sarah's perspective. You did well don't worry.
Also I hope you have had a few more readers come your way after I shared your story :)
5/9/2020 c4 BowieQueen
Ahhhhh I wish my husband would read me Pride and Prejudice in a park. All he does is mock Mrs Bennett. LOL.
Another lovely chapter.
Ahhhhh I wish my husband would read me Pride and Prejudice in a park. All he does is mock Mrs Bennett. LOL.
Another lovely chapter.
5/8/2020 c2 BowieQueen
Ahhhhh sad Jareth. His heartbreak is killing me.
Can't wait to read more, but I will be heading to bed soon.
Ahhhhh sad Jareth. His heartbreak is killing me.
Can't wait to read more, but I will be heading to bed soon.
3/15/2020 c6 Jayne
You wrote this story a long time ago, but wow I’m glad I found this story!
You wrote this story a long time ago, but wow I’m glad I found this story!
12/8/2016 c6 salsas100
Wao, that was an awesome read!
I love the way you interpreted the movie and continued it. What's more you waited for her to become an adult BEFORE making her Jareth's, so that's all good for me.
Plus, the way you wrote it is very good. I'm just sad it wasn't longer ... !
Thank you for sharing your work with us, it was great :D
Wao, that was an awesome read!
I love the way you interpreted the movie and continued it. What's more you waited for her to become an adult BEFORE making her Jareth's, so that's all good for me.
Plus, the way you wrote it is very good. I'm just sad it wasn't longer ... !
Thank you for sharing your work with us, it was great :D
10/18/2016 c6 chocokekskrueml
Yes. Definitely in need of a cold (very cold!) shower. This was pure sweetness and I loved every inch of it. I'm happy to see a story with jareth's point of view - it is quiet intoxicating to read how he longs for her. Who wouldn't want someone to love one as unconditional as he does?
Thanks for this masterpiece. 3
Yes. Definitely in need of a cold (very cold!) shower. This was pure sweetness and I loved every inch of it. I'm happy to see a story with jareth's point of view - it is quiet intoxicating to read how he longs for her. Who wouldn't want someone to love one as unconditional as he does?
Thanks for this masterpiece. 3
8/21/2016 c6 118Ebenbild
I so would love to see what Sarah will do about college and her family. I wonder if she will simply travel between worlds from now on or if she'll give up college. I also wonder if she'll introduce her husband to her parents and if she tells them that they're married or if she tells them that he's her boyfriend at first. Will Sarah even think about returning to her world for college? Will she stop aging now that she's married to a fae or will she age and die, leaving Jareth alone for forever after her death?
I wish you would have written an epilogue about all that...
Nevertheless, I adore your story and your explanation about Jareth's decision and how he got his Sarah in the end. I also loved the chapter on Sarah's PoV, showing her side of everything.
Thank you so much for writing this!
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118EbenbildI so would love to see what Sarah will do about college and her family. I wonder if she will simply travel between worlds from now on or if she'll give up college. I also wonder if she'll introduce her husband to her parents and if she tells them that they're married or if she tells them that he's her boyfriend at first. Will Sarah even think about returning to her world for college? Will she stop aging now that she's married to a fae or will she age and die, leaving Jareth alone for forever after her death?
I wish you would have written an epilogue about all that...
Nevertheless, I adore your story and your explanation about Jareth's decision and how he got his Sarah in the end. I also loved the chapter on Sarah's PoV, showing her side of everything.
Thank you so much for writing this!
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