4/14/2023 c1 puraiuddo
Ah, well I don’t suppose you’re coming back to this. Or maybe you will eventually?
But, at any rate, this and part 1 are absolutely brilliant.
I have a VERY strong preference for never reading first person… like just about nothing can force me to read it, regardless of the reviews or attention a fic has. Probably haven’t read a 1st POV in literally a decade?
But somehow your writing style just REALLY drew me in? Lots and lots of super creative and gruesome similes. I loved every minute of it.
Super screwed up premise and so angsty and fascinating. LOVE the character dynamics.
I hope you come back to this one day! But even if not, I’m happy you could leave off on them at least knowing Raph is alive so I can have my own headcanons from there. XD
Ah, well I don’t suppose you’re coming back to this. Or maybe you will eventually?
But, at any rate, this and part 1 are absolutely brilliant.
I have a VERY strong preference for never reading first person… like just about nothing can force me to read it, regardless of the reviews or attention a fic has. Probably haven’t read a 1st POV in literally a decade?
But somehow your writing style just REALLY drew me in? Lots and lots of super creative and gruesome similes. I loved every minute of it.
Super screwed up premise and so angsty and fascinating. LOVE the character dynamics.
I hope you come back to this one day! But even if not, I’m happy you could leave off on them at least knowing Raph is alive so I can have my own headcanons from there. XD
11/5/2022 c1 Guest
Hi, so I know this about 6 years old, and you’ve probably got way more important things to do than write fanficton considering the last update I saw, you were in college and that was a while ago, but I was wondering if you were ever going to work on this again? I’m not saying “hey! Update the story!” , I’m just asking If I should look forward to a continuation or If I should just move on from this story. I don’t wanna have hope for something that will inevitably lead to “disappointment”, which is a harsh word, I know, but I’m not very articulate when It comes to words and don’t know how else to describe it… uh, anyway, can you maybe, if you even see this, just bluntly state yes or no. And if you’re not sure, then you can tell me that too!
I hope you’re okay and I’m not trying to get answers from a dead person or something, but I wish you well!
- a random guy who found this by scrolling at 4 am :]
Hi, so I know this about 6 years old, and you’ve probably got way more important things to do than write fanficton considering the last update I saw, you were in college and that was a while ago, but I was wondering if you were ever going to work on this again? I’m not saying “hey! Update the story!” , I’m just asking If I should look forward to a continuation or If I should just move on from this story. I don’t wanna have hope for something that will inevitably lead to “disappointment”, which is a harsh word, I know, but I’m not very articulate when It comes to words and don’t know how else to describe it… uh, anyway, can you maybe, if you even see this, just bluntly state yes or no. And if you’re not sure, then you can tell me that too!
I hope you’re okay and I’m not trying to get answers from a dead person or something, but I wish you well!
- a random guy who found this by scrolling at 4 am :]
12/5/2021 c1 Starstreakwriter
Please update and finish this story. Youre such as good writer! I must know how they save Raph!
Please update and finish this story. Youre such as good writer! I must know how they save Raph!
12/4/2021 c1 Guest
Hey, do you think you can still continued this? I know it's been 5 years, and soon to be 6 years– I won't force you though, just keep it update :)
Hey, do you think you can still continued this? I know it's been 5 years, and soon to be 6 years– I won't force you though, just keep it update :)
1/1/2020 c1 Guest
Hey, I have no idea if you’re still updating this story or if you’re even still on this account, but if by some luck you are, please PLEASE update this story! I read the first half and loved it so much, you can’t believe how happy I was to find a part 2, even if it’s incomplete. It’s been like...4 years at this point? But I still hope that you can come back and put an ending to this world that you started, or at least give us an update to tell us you’re cancelling the story. You’re an amazing writer, stories as good as yours are rare to come across and I really appreciate all the effort you put into your writing. I know how hard it is to find motivation when you’re depressed, but I hope you can find the strength the end this story once and for all, whether that means updating it or canceling it. Good luck in your future endeavors.
-random person who loves your work
Hey, I have no idea if you’re still updating this story or if you’re even still on this account, but if by some luck you are, please PLEASE update this story! I read the first half and loved it so much, you can’t believe how happy I was to find a part 2, even if it’s incomplete. It’s been like...4 years at this point? But I still hope that you can come back and put an ending to this world that you started, or at least give us an update to tell us you’re cancelling the story. You’re an amazing writer, stories as good as yours are rare to come across and I really appreciate all the effort you put into your writing. I know how hard it is to find motivation when you’re depressed, but I hope you can find the strength the end this story once and for all, whether that means updating it or canceling it. Good luck in your future endeavors.
-random person who loves your work
12/22/2018 c1 TheHomieKnownAsB
Dear Rebel, I know what it's like to be depressed, and I most certainly am not saying, "hey, update soon!" I use writing as an outlet for my emotions, and that's cool if you don't. But on the sliver of a chance you're still there, please know that you are by far the most talented writer on this site yet. You've got the best characterization for Raphael, too. Even though Diporae is a pretty darn good writer, her/his (idk gender) work is outmatched by yours. I know, this is weird, coming from a stranger, and even though I will never meet you in real life, just know that I love YOU and not just your work. I can feel the effort peeling off of your work in waves and I know it's hard to write some of these more intricate chapters, so, from the bottom of my heart, be safe. If it's already too late, I'm sorry that I couldn't have found you earlier and done something to help. Rebel, I can't put into words the impact you've made on me even though I barely know anything about you. Take all the time in the world, if you want, but bear in mind that you've got so many fans who are anxious as hell to see what you've got in store for us. Thank you, Rebel, for gifting me with your incredible work. (P.S., your are now my muse) Thank you!
-Love, TheNmbr1Gamer.
Dear Rebel, I know what it's like to be depressed, and I most certainly am not saying, "hey, update soon!" I use writing as an outlet for my emotions, and that's cool if you don't. But on the sliver of a chance you're still there, please know that you are by far the most talented writer on this site yet. You've got the best characterization for Raphael, too. Even though Diporae is a pretty darn good writer, her/his (idk gender) work is outmatched by yours. I know, this is weird, coming from a stranger, and even though I will never meet you in real life, just know that I love YOU and not just your work. I can feel the effort peeling off of your work in waves and I know it's hard to write some of these more intricate chapters, so, from the bottom of my heart, be safe. If it's already too late, I'm sorry that I couldn't have found you earlier and done something to help. Rebel, I can't put into words the impact you've made on me even though I barely know anything about you. Take all the time in the world, if you want, but bear in mind that you've got so many fans who are anxious as hell to see what you've got in store for us. Thank you, Rebel, for gifting me with your incredible work. (P.S., your are now my muse) Thank you!
-Love, TheNmbr1Gamer.
8/8/2018 c1 Guest
I got hooked on your story and read it all in one day...wheres the rest of it?!
You are an amazing writer! I was on the edge of my seat all day. Please finish!
I got hooked on your story and read it all in one day...wheres the rest of it?!
You are an amazing writer! I was on the edge of my seat all day. Please finish!
1/11/2018 c1 2BlueDove216
Wow. I'm just hooked on this. It is too good. I don't want to rush or anything but I'm ready to wait for the next chapter. I know how important reviews are to writers and I just want to praise the time and effort put into this. I really hope nothing too serious happens to Raph. I mean like loss of limbs or something but I love the psychological torture that happens. Take your time, we'll be waiting.
Wow. I'm just hooked on this. It is too good. I don't want to rush or anything but I'm ready to wait for the next chapter. I know how important reviews are to writers and I just want to praise the time and effort put into this. I really hope nothing too serious happens to Raph. I mean like loss of limbs or something but I love the psychological torture that happens. Take your time, we'll be waiting.
9/21/2016 c1 Guest
Write more!
Write more!
7/8/2016 c1 14LadybugGirl7068
The last time I saw this story was maybe a year ago, and I'm just soooo happy to see that it has come this far! I re-read this in two days, and it kept me up until three in the morning... So it was really really good in my book! You're probably one of my favorite authors just by how much detail you include and I can really tell how much thought you put into each chapter! I'll certainly be waiting for the next update!
The last time I saw this story was maybe a year ago, and I'm just soooo happy to see that it has come this far! I re-read this in two days, and it kept me up until three in the morning... So it was really really good in my book! You're probably one of my favorite authors just by how much detail you include and I can really tell how much thought you put into each chapter! I'll certainly be waiting for the next update!
6/14/2016 c1 27Drumboy100
What a plot summary-and then to give us only 530 words! Update, no excuses, college semester is over, plus a true writer would stay up all night and live on caffeine anyway. Love your writing style.
What a plot summary-and then to give us only 530 words! Update, no excuses, college semester is over, plus a true writer would stay up all night and live on caffeine anyway. Love your writing style.
6/3/2016 c1 German Girl
Thank you for this! Just read the whole first part. And now this more please
Thank you for this! Just read the whole first part. And now this more please