
11/20/2016 c6
1Jake and Larzel
Hi! This is Larzel! This story cracked me up. It has some great humor. Also, the characters also feel very human at the sad parts. I'm not sure familiar with most of them, but you definitely made them endearing.

Hi! This is Larzel! This story cracked me up. It has some great humor. Also, the characters also feel very human at the sad parts. I'm not sure familiar with most of them, but you definitely made them endearing.
10/13/2016 c6 Guest
*Bouncing around happily* I can't wait to read the backstory u
*Bouncing around happily* I can't wait to read the backstory u
10/4/2016 c1 Guest
I love, how emotional deeply some parts of your story are.
Some of the text messages really made me laugh and the conversations at the games were great to, after I figured out, hwo exactly was takting ;-)
I am curious of how you would bring Inertia into the present present of the tv series(hint) or why he didn't directly followed Bart. How would the team react? How the left behind Thad? .
I love, how emotional deeply some parts of your story are.
Some of the text messages really made me laugh and the conversations at the games were great to, after I figured out, hwo exactly was takting ;-)
I am curious of how you would bring Inertia into the present present of the tv series(hint) or why he didn't directly followed Bart. How would the team react? How the left behind Thad? .
8/8/2016 c4 Rabbitlost
More fluff. Can you write one were jenni gets a boy friend and everyone is trying to kill him.
Thank you . P.s your book is great
More fluff. Can you write one were jenni gets a boy friend and everyone is trying to kill him.
Thank you . P.s your book is great
7/7/2016 c2 Guest
Oh my gosh! I love this!
Oh my gosh! I love this!
6/20/2016 c1
1xJessilee
Damn it XD I only just realised that you uploaded three fanfictions. Adorable story by the way, I'm on my way to read the other two now :D

Damn it XD I only just realised that you uploaded three fanfictions. Adorable story by the way, I'm on my way to read the other two now :D
6/4/2016 c1 Guest
Oh my gosh this is great! Thank you for writing!
Oh my gosh this is great! Thank you for writing!
6/2/2016 c1 Guest
Please continue
Please continue