
6/6/2016 c2 Guest
Such a amazing story
Such a amazing story
6/4/2016 c1 Guest
Omg pls continue
Omg pls continue
6/6/2016 c2
14Hugh Takinamee
My, oh my, can't believe we worked on this in one day! Well done! I'm really enjoying it so far!

My, oh my, can't believe we worked on this in one day! Well done! I'm really enjoying it so far!
6/2/2016 c1
9melodicBooknerd13
Oh my God this was great and really sad.
I don't feel like going in depth with my review right now since its 1 am but just know that I love it

Oh my God this was great and really sad.
I don't feel like going in depth with my review right now since its 1 am but just know that I love it
6/2/2016 c1
7Dolphinz811
This was awesome Audi and Julius! Great story that I hope will be continued! You used a very haunting style of wording that made the tension as big as can be at the end and I guarantee you two that if it was read infront of people, you'd hear a pin drop because of how powerful this is! Favorited and Followed! Keep up the awesome work! :)

This was awesome Audi and Julius! Great story that I hope will be continued! You used a very haunting style of wording that made the tension as big as can be at the end and I guarantee you two that if it was read infront of people, you'd hear a pin drop because of how powerful this is! Favorited and Followed! Keep up the awesome work! :)