2/16/2017 c6 adamse0530
I absolutely loved this chapter. I can't wait for the new pairing in the next one. Keep up the amazing work!
I absolutely loved this chapter. I can't wait for the new pairing in the next one. Keep up the amazing work!
2/15/2017 c6 Guest
Okay I really like but if your trying to make a legitimate story arc of your own kind of cut out all the references to MGSV TPP and kind of twist the canon story arc of the Steven Universe into something that's original that you can call (to an extent) yours. Don't get me wrong I laughed my ass when miller just randomly showed up but just make something that borrows from other people but in itself is original without relying on others storylines. On the other hand it's your story so do what you want that's just a suggestion from a fellow writer and a fan.
Okay I really like but if your trying to make a legitimate story arc of your own kind of cut out all the references to MGSV TPP and kind of twist the canon story arc of the Steven Universe into something that's original that you can call (to an extent) yours. Don't get me wrong I laughed my ass when miller just randomly showed up but just make something that borrows from other people but in itself is original without relying on others storylines. On the other hand it's your story so do what you want that's just a suggestion from a fellow writer and a fan.
2/12/2017 c6 Shi
Omg! This is so good, I want more! And that gun was a tranquilizer gun right?
Omg! This is so good, I want more! And that gun was a tranquilizer gun right?
2/5/2017 c6 1Jacksonson5567
WOW. I did not expect this. This chapter was amazing, I'd say better than all of the others.
It was definitely worth the wait, and I'm so exeited for the next chapter.
If your reading this, than please do something with peridot next. I think she's a really good character, and I've been hoping to see more peridot in this story since the beginning.
WOW. I did not expect this. This chapter was amazing, I'd say better than all of the others.
It was definitely worth the wait, and I'm so exeited for the next chapter.
If your reading this, than please do something with peridot next. I think she's a really good character, and I've been hoping to see more peridot in this story since the beginning.
1/12/2017 c6 Guest
I've enjoyed reading this so far. I hope Lapis is next, then Peridot. I'm guessimg Lapis' flavor will be Blueberry and Peri's flavor will be either Lime or Green Apple (probably Green Apple, because Limes are sour and not really sweet, unless it's Limeade). So humans have flavors too, huh?
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. No rush though, take your time.
I've enjoyed reading this so far. I hope Lapis is next, then Peridot. I'm guessimg Lapis' flavor will be Blueberry and Peri's flavor will be either Lime or Green Apple (probably Green Apple, because Limes are sour and not really sweet, unless it's Limeade). So humans have flavors too, huh?
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. No rush though, take your time.
1/8/2017 c6 deaduser202
About time I caught up, although I should've before you update these. Nice way to end it as well and I looked up what the gun did even though you told me, just wanted details. Anyway, good luck on your next. (I won't spoil anything of what you got in mind here)
About time I caught up, although I should've before you update these. Nice way to end it as well and I looked up what the gun did even though you told me, just wanted details. Anyway, good luck on your next. (I won't spoil anything of what you got in mind here)
1/5/2017 c6 Darky Universe
WOOOOOOOO! SUPER LIT AF! DARKY NEEDS MORE!
WOOOOOOOO! SUPER LIT AF! DARKY NEEDS MORE!
12/26/2016 c6 4chimchar14
Glad to see a new chapter! It's always a fun surprise to find you update this story. Once again, so many references I don't get, but the ones I do understand are very fun. I just love the interactions with the characters, and the sex scenes are top notch. Don't let those guests or other punks get to you, just update whenever you feel like it. Hope you have a fun winter
Glad to see a new chapter! It's always a fun surprise to find you update this story. Once again, so many references I don't get, but the ones I do understand are very fun. I just love the interactions with the characters, and the sex scenes are top notch. Don't let those guests or other punks get to you, just update whenever you feel like it. Hope you have a fun winter
12/26/2016 c6 Seal
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12/25/2016 c6 1DarkTwistedParadies
Wow, the storyline is really amazing! Also I didn't expect Connie's mother having a flavor. That really surprised me. Anyways keep up the great work!
Wow, the storyline is really amazing! Also I didn't expect Connie's mother having a flavor. That really surprised me. Anyways keep up the great work!