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7RandomObsessiveReader
expectedly harsh start, but nice story overall. :)
thanks for sharing!
7RandomObsessiveReaderexpectedly harsh start, but nice story overall. :)
thanks for sharing!
2/8 c15 Corwyn
Loved this story, and I'm very glad to see it completed. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Loved this story, and I'm very glad to see it completed. Thanks for sharing it with us.
1/1 c15 FriendlyFire59
That was fun and yes it was like one of the less dark English comedies (ie Ealing Comedies)1.
Thanks for having posted.
1) Alex Guinness played Nine characters in one film 'Kind Hearts and Coronets' (1949) people should give it a try.
That was fun and yes it was like one of the less dark English comedies (ie Ealing Comedies)1.
Thanks for having posted.
1) Alex Guinness played Nine characters in one film 'Kind Hearts and Coronets' (1949) people should give it a try.
1/1 c3 FriendlyFire59
Why does this remind me of some late 50's and 60's English crime comedies that probably had (now) Sir Alec Guinness or Peter Sellers in a few of them? oh oh The Lavender Hill Mob! no, (googlefu) The girls remind me of the gang in The Ladykillers (1955 film) with Alec Guinness, Herbert Lom, and Peter Sellers. I was going to say something about being darker in tone than the comedies, but Ladykillers was rather dark too.
Why does this remind me of some late 50's and 60's English crime comedies that probably had (now) Sir Alec Guinness or Peter Sellers in a few of them? oh oh The Lavender Hill Mob! no, (googlefu) The girls remind me of the gang in The Ladykillers (1955 film) with Alec Guinness, Herbert Lom, and Peter Sellers. I was going to say something about being darker in tone than the comedies, but Ladykillers was rather dark too.
12/28/2023 c15 3Pinkypi
This story has more swiss in it than your usual ones. But fuck it it was entertaining.
3PinkypiThis story has more swiss in it than your usual ones. But fuck it it was entertaining.
12/28/2023 c5 Pinkypi
JS but the actions of the PRT here is the last thing they'd actually do. You had the right of it with Piggot deciding to let Danny hopefully talk to her first. Barging in on the home like this would effectively spook her and lose her so it wouldn't actually be ordered. Bad follow through. Bad.
Unless this is a Coil plot trying to drive her from home. In which case Nevermind. He'd totally do this to push her on the outs harder.
JS but the actions of the PRT here is the last thing they'd actually do. You had the right of it with Piggot deciding to let Danny hopefully talk to her first. Barging in on the home like this would effectively spook her and lose her so it wouldn't actually be ordered. Bad follow through. Bad.
Unless this is a Coil plot trying to drive her from home. In which case Nevermind. He'd totally do this to push her on the outs harder.
12/28/2023 c2 Pinkypi
Ziz - what naughty things can we get up to.
You know... Perfect opportunity here for Amy to tune up Vicky now that she's already crossed the line so to speak. She can easily make Vicky much much harder to kill when her shields down. While improving her base physical strength which could theoretically improved enhanced strength since we don't actually know how Victoria's strength is increased. If it's a multiplier on her base strength much stronger Vicky. If it's not then IDK. but better eye candy for Amy maybe?
Ziz - what naughty things can we get up to.
You know... Perfect opportunity here for Amy to tune up Vicky now that she's already crossed the line so to speak. She can easily make Vicky much much harder to kill when her shields down. While improving her base physical strength which could theoretically improved enhanced strength since we don't actually know how Victoria's strength is increased. If it's a multiplier on her base strength much stronger Vicky. If it's not then IDK. but better eye candy for Amy maybe?
6/14/2023 c13 Aetherium21
Did they not ID Coil as Calvert yet? Been ages since k read this story but don’t recall in recent chapters the PRT noticing from his corpse
Did they not ID Coil as Calvert yet? Been ages since k read this story but don’t recall in recent chapters the PRT noticing from his corpse
4/5/2023 c6 97531
Cool thinks Aisha is a bug controller? Let him deluge himself.
Cool thinks Aisha is a bug controller? Let him deluge himself.
3/20/2023 c15 Mercutio
Beautiful story. I really enjoyed it. I was scared that everything was going to go horribly wrong and instead it went horribly right! I thought that the 'supervillain party' was the best thing ever.
Beautiful story. I really enjoyed it. I was scared that everything was going to go horribly wrong and instead it went horribly right! I thought that the 'supervillain party' was the best thing ever.
3/21/2023 c15 Armiture
Thanks for the sort of happy ending and the great fight scene with Circus.
I enjoyed this story and look forward to your next update of one of your other stories.
Thanks for the sort of happy ending and the great fight scene with Circus.
I enjoyed this story and look forward to your next update of one of your other stories.
3/18/2023 c15 1Orannis4
Thank you for making this story. It is sad that their is no part 2 in the works, I would love to see how these 4 would have overcome the challengens that would have come their way.
1Orannis4Thank you for making this story. It is sad that their is no part 2 in the works, I would love to see how these 4 would have overcome the challengens that would have come their way.
3/13/2023 c15 Guest
Got thinking control Endbringers
Got thinking control Endbringers