for One Bad Day11/15/2022 c14 
16zigmas
Not sure I entirely like this small-street-level type of story, but let's see it to the end, I guess.
16zigmasNot sure I entirely like this small-street-level type of story, but let's see it to the end, I guess.
11/15/2022 c14 2CykaBlyatintensifies
Let's hope Vicky gets healed before shit hits the fan. Oh, who am kidding?
2CykaBlyatintensifiesLet's hope Vicky gets healed before shit hits the fan. Oh, who am kidding?
9/10/2022 c13 3Deirdre Skye
If Circus demagnetized the magnets in a magnetic keyed lock even partly, she has just rendered it permanently inoperable without specialized equipment, which she doesn't have on her or she'd have already used it. And as others have pointed out, she might well have ruined the rest of the lock's mechanism. So the appropriate response at this point is, to use a colloquialism, "Smooth move, loser."
3Deirdre SkyeIf Circus demagnetized the magnets in a magnetic keyed lock even partly, she has just rendered it permanently inoperable without specialized equipment, which she doesn't have on her or she'd have already used it. And as others have pointed out, she might well have ruined the rest of the lock's mechanism. So the appropriate response at this point is, to use a colloquialism, "Smooth move, loser."
7/15/2022 c11 an1979
Nitpick:
" Most every part of him wanted to shout and scream at her, to take her throat in his hands and squeeze. "
*ALMOST* every/zero/nothing/infinity/everything/all/etc.
"MOST" there is as senseless as "could care less" / "irregardless" /etc.
Nitpick:
" Most every part of him wanted to shout and scream at her, to take her throat in his hands and squeeze. "
*ALMOST* every/zero/nothing/infinity/everything/all/etc.
"MOST" there is as senseless as "could care less" / "irregardless" /etc.
6/21/2022 c13 1Alehhandro
That thing with the theme party was SO SMOOTH i almost slipped on the lines reading it.
Amazing chapter and thank you for the hilarious fun!
1AlehhandroThat thing with the theme party was SO SMOOTH i almost slipped on the lines reading it.
Amazing chapter and thank you for the hilarious fun!
6/20/2022 c13 Armiture
I'm sure that like my reaction, everyone thought that Aisha isn't as dumb as she seems, when the "party plan" was explained. Thanks for the laughs!
I hope that Circus doesn't screw everything up but I get the feeling that everything will happen at once in the next episode as things go Murphy's Law.
Thanks for the update.
I'm sure that like my reaction, everyone thought that Aisha isn't as dumb as she seems, when the "party plan" was explained. Thanks for the laughs!
I hope that Circus doesn't screw everything up but I get the feeling that everything will happen at once in the next episode as things go Murphy's Law.
Thanks for the update.
6/19/2022 c13 BetaKeja
Why would you assume that a lock that uses magnets would still work when you demagnetize the magnets? Now there's no way to manipulate those former magnets so the lock should be permanently locked.
Why would you assume that a lock that uses magnets would still work when you demagnetize the magnets? Now there's no way to manipulate those former magnets so the lock should be permanently locked.
6/11/2022 c13 haphazard1
Really enjoying this story. As disturbing as the central problem with Vicky is, the group is trying to put things right again. Lots of tension, plot twists all over the place, and the party theme idea is hilarious. I do hope this ends (mostly) happily with Vicky restored, but it is hard to see everything turning out well with Carol, the PRT, and Amy's many issues all mixed together. It seems inevitable that something is going to blow up.
Really enjoying this story. As disturbing as the central problem with Vicky is, the group is trying to put things right again. Lots of tension, plot twists all over the place, and the party theme idea is hilarious. I do hope this ends (mostly) happily with Vicky restored, but it is hard to see everything turning out well with Carol, the PRT, and Amy's many issues all mixed together. It seems inevitable that something is going to blow up.
6/8/2022 c13 EP
SYMPA
SYMPA
6/8/2022 c13 Guest
so cool
so cool
6/9/2022 c13 Mugen-Muse
Well, the party theme idea sounds good and appears to be working. Though it sounds like Cranial should have asked more questions for what she considered a "weird job." The PRT and Protectorate at least have the excuse of working with what info they have available. They may be wrong with their conclusions, but still.
Well, the party theme idea sounds good and appears to be working. Though it sounds like Cranial should have asked more questions for what she considered a "weird job." The PRT and Protectorate at least have the excuse of working with what info they have available. They may be wrong with their conclusions, but still.
6/9/2022 c13 Caver Floyd
I keep waiting for it all to blow up in their faces. Circus will get out, but I can't see her making it far as I'm sure Taylor is keeping an eye on her cell door.
I keep waiting for it all to blow up in their faces. Circus will get out, but I can't see her making it far as I'm sure Taylor is keeping an eye on her cell door.