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6/19/2020 c1 yyy
hello sorry if my english is bad can i adapt this fanfic to wattpad? the chapter is very good, I am sure that the others too!
7/16/2019 c1 Guest
Why is Naruto fucking retarded in this? Tayuya is one of Orochimaru's cursed seal warriors, broke into a hidden village (which is a crime btw) and attacked his friends and attempted to kill Shikimaru, so how the fuck is she innocent?

Man I'm sure I can kill all of Naruto's friends and he'll say that I'm innocent and should be free of all charges. What a retard.
10/13/2018 c12 Jony uzumaki
Oooohhh Oliver y Naruto demonios Queiro ver eso enserio... Dante maldicion amigo vuelve aquí y escribe esto se pone muy bueno
10/13/2018 c11 Jony uzumaki
Dante mi amigo está historia es increíble que se vayan a la mierda todos los demás me encanta ojalá tengas más para dar de esto y amo el narutayu es una gran pareja, me muero por ver como Naruto vuelta e y resuelve los problemas en casa con danzó
3/11/2018 c3 Guest
I read he was getting a red and yellow suit I was like hmpf faggot
9/30/2017 c1 Koncor the great
Wow this is hard to read I recommend fixing this ok I love tayua X Naruto best naruto pairing. Anyways I'll put this off for a while. Btw just curious have you ever considered a role reversal were one single moment changed the entire story. Were in the battle on the bridge sauske gets a senbon to the ankle and can't defend naruto and sees naruto go into a death like state awaking his mangekyo Sharingan the right way and becoming more honest with himselfand others more like naruto defeats haku female sauskes pairing.
(Wisper"kill Sakura") and haku joins the leaf as Sakura is incapable of being a ninja because of a combanation of trama and injury (wisper"in a shallow grave next to zabuza") haku takes zabuzas sword and trains with it to honor her father's Legacy. Naruto upon recovering is replaced by his evil alter ego who tortures him and the fox in they're combined mindscape (wisper"thanks danzo now we have a mentally unstable jinchurki with bloodline's and a arsanal a mile long with a hatred of the leaf in the cunnin exams reday to be infunced by orchimaru) and apon waking up he unlocks a blood line or combination of bloodlines that makes him useful to Orochimaru plus sauske is now not a esay target he'll wait for him to have a child to take sauskes childs body. ( I'd go iron release and Ketsuryūgan) powerful combanation. Also we still don't know what the upper limit of the Ketsuryūgan is so who's to say it would not be interesting to orchimaru.
6/17/2017 c12 GmanJynx
Hello Dante,
I would like to start by saying well done. The switch of the dimensions was explained well and I am looking forward to the rest of the story and the return trip. I am interested to see the more complete fusion of how the Flash would be as a shinobi. Keep up the good work, and I need to catch up on some Netflix now...

3/3/2017 c10 Guest
The bad grammar was already irritating. Now you had to ruin it.

Good job.
3/1/2017 c11 Guest
It's a reaLlysfaen good story keep writing
3/2/2017 c12 SPark681
Nice chapter and glad I mentioned that about zoom anyways keep up the great work!
3/1/2017 c12 3DonningTheCowlOfTheDarkKnight
I would catch up on the Berlanti verse BIG TIME. If you have netflix, that would be a great start. It would give you tons of extra material to work with. Plus you didn't kill off Ronnie, so you might be able to incorporate him into the Legends of Tomorrow stuff too. You have the potential to have a completely insane, yet awesome story. Keep up the great work. PS. SPOILER ALERT. RAY is alive and is a Legend in Legends of Tomorrow.
3/1/2017 c12 1KidKiisu
great chapter, and I'm glad that you decided to continue this story. Keep up the good work
2/26/2017 c11 SPark681
Nice story so far though gotta wonder who this Zoom character kills to make Naruto want to kill him that is so out of character for Naruto anyways keep up the great work!
2/22/2017 c11 3DonningTheCowlOfTheDarkKnight
I don't have a lot of reviews yet, BUT I do have a decent amount of faves and follows. I post on facebook in fanfiction anonymous, fanfiction . net, Um... Fanfiction Writers Unite, and fanfiction/Fiction Press, groups on facebook. It gets your fics noticed a LOT faster. I tend to use the rules for Fanfiction/Fiction Press when I post in all the groups. It helps. Trust me. Good luck.
2/22/2017 c10 DonningTheCowlOfTheDarkKnight
I stand corrected. This is awesome. I like the dynamic here. And having Jax not become the new firestorm is sort of a Win/Lose thing for me since I like both incarnations of him. Maybe have him become firestorm with Ronnie because Dr. Stein go hurt. So there is a combination of firestorms?
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