9/11/2023 c7 3harashien
So I don’t know if you are aware of this, most European countries just say university instead of college. Reason? College is the French equivalent to middle school.
So I don’t know if you are aware of this, most European countries just say university instead of college. Reason? College is the French equivalent to middle school.
9/11/2023 c4 harashien
I think this is the most creative way to get rid of Harry’s cannon reset button
I think this is the most creative way to get rid of Harry’s cannon reset button
9/11/2023 c3 An Overthinker
I don't suppose you are aware of Minerva's canon relationship history, are you? You can find it fairly easily just by Googleing her name. Wizardingworld dot com has a pretty thorough coverage of her life before the books started.
I don't suppose you are aware of Minerva's canon relationship history, are you? You can find it fairly easily just by Googleing her name. Wizardingworld dot com has a pretty thorough coverage of her life before the books started.
9/11/2023 c10 lucariotnn01
Well, I don't read stories where the author contradicts himself, that ruins her immersion.
Well, I don't read stories where the author contradicts himself, that ruins her immersion.
9/11/2023 c10 Mark1
A friendly piece of advice, don't make your fic overcomplicated, KEEP IT SIMPLE STUPID!... Overcomplicated, like the addition of too many OCs and a divine being! You will note that these additions usually end in the author burning out of ideas just to include these characters and make the advantage of Harry"s gamer system in check as to not make him too OP...what is wrong with being OP? The objective of the gamer system concept is to give Harry "the power he knows not" meaning he must be OP to really crush Voldemort and his goons in the final battle! Not by some random luck or technicality. I have read several Gamer fics that was abandoned because of its overcomplication.
A friendly piece of advice, don't make your fic overcomplicated, KEEP IT SIMPLE STUPID!... Overcomplicated, like the addition of too many OCs and a divine being! You will note that these additions usually end in the author burning out of ideas just to include these characters and make the advantage of Harry"s gamer system in check as to not make him too OP...what is wrong with being OP? The objective of the gamer system concept is to give Harry "the power he knows not" meaning he must be OP to really crush Voldemort and his goons in the final battle! Not by some random luck or technicality. I have read several Gamer fics that was abandoned because of its overcomplication.
9/10/2023 c9 1rajeshkont
How can Harry be the price when he had no input in it?
How can Harry lose his freedom in the deal when he didn't involve himself?
Didn't he say deals can be forced. What is this.
How can Harry be the price when he had no input in it?
How can Harry lose his freedom in the deal when he didn't involve himself?
Didn't he say deals can be forced. What is this.
9/10/2023 c9 ghdfghdfg
yeah but harry didnt make the deal... so how can he be marked? Seems against the rules you laid out earlier, a sign of a poor lore
yeah but harry didnt make the deal... so how can he be marked? Seems against the rules you laid out earlier, a sign of a poor lore
9/10/2023 c10 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read an I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
I really like this story. It's an excellent read an I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
9/10/2023 c10 lou2003us
I really want to see what happens next. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
I really want to see what happens next. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!