6/4/2016 c1 56Generalhyna
This has potential I hope you develop in the future and can I give suggestions to make it grow
This has potential I hope you develop in the future and can I give suggestions to make it grow
6/4/2016 c1 1LordGhostStriker
honestly i expected this to b like most harry potter gamer story and the hacks they give harry.
but nope you have him as a kid who JUST got his gamer powers and is NOW started learning about it and its uses.
honestly i expected this to b like most harry potter gamer story and the hacks they give harry.
but nope you have him as a kid who JUST got his gamer powers and is NOW started learning about it and its uses.
6/4/2016 c1 Fairydust
Awesome stuff I'm stoked about this story keep up the good work
Awesome stuff I'm stoked about this story keep up the good work
6/4/2016 c1 1ghosthippo
An excellent start, but I truly hope that people around him don't learn of his special ability, there is nothing that ruins a Gamer!Fic like suddenly having him share his ability with all of his friends, joining in groups and suddenly everyone gains stat points and benefits... no, just no. Its his, its what makes him special.
An excellent start, but I truly hope that people around him don't learn of his special ability, there is nothing that ruins a Gamer!Fic like suddenly having him share his ability with all of his friends, joining in groups and suddenly everyone gains stat points and benefits... no, just no. Its his, its what makes him special.
6/4/2016 c1 kassatsujizai
So far I've really enjoyed this story. A few spelling errors but the story flow's so well that you barely notice. Keep writing, please.
So far I've really enjoyed this story. A few spelling errors but the story flow's so well that you barely notice. Keep writing, please.
6/4/2016 c1 4hellz swordsman
Nice liked the boss. Perhaps for another fight Harry could fight feral cats that have escaped from Mrs. Figg lead by a nekomata or large magical cat. Also will harry be using a sword? Its one of your naruto prevalent weapons so maybe? But perhaps a bow instead.
Nice liked the boss. Perhaps for another fight Harry could fight feral cats that have escaped from Mrs. Figg lead by a nekomata or large magical cat. Also will harry be using a sword? Its one of your naruto prevalent weapons so maybe? But perhaps a bow instead.
6/4/2016 c1 smurfninjaman
I'm going to make the joke that almost all of the wizards in the original harry potter world had wisdom scores of 40 at max. Anywho great first chapter can't wait for more.
I'm going to make the joke that almost all of the wizards in the original harry potter world had wisdom scores of 40 at max. Anywho great first chapter can't wait for more.