for WITCH A different story Prologue: Four Royals of the Supernatural6/21/2018 c1 Guest
That was utterly SPECTACULAR! I’m talking masterclass storytelling! I am so interested and hooked like holy shit I’m speechless and can’t wait to read more!
That was utterly SPECTACULAR! I’m talking masterclass storytelling! I am so interested and hooked like holy shit I’m speechless and can’t wait to read more!
10/20/2016 c2 
39Oblivian03
I can't say I've read the comics (because I haven't ;) But I get where you are coming from. This is more to reply to the last half of your post - YES! REALISTICALLY FLAWED PROTAGONISTS AND HEROES! BLURRY LINES OF GOOD/BAD BECAUSE IN THE END EVERYONE HAS A REASON THEY ARE DOING WHAT THEY ARE DOING! In short - I look forward to giving your main story a try. :) As I have said in my previous review (or if I didn't I am saying it now), I love how you set up the previous characters. In fact, you have me so hooked I am currently blowing off writing my own story that I need to update (which I was pumped to write... thanks for that -_- But then again, this seems totally worth it ;)
39Oblivian03I can't say I've read the comics (because I haven't ;) But I get where you are coming from. This is more to reply to the last half of your post - YES! REALISTICALLY FLAWED PROTAGONISTS AND HEROES! BLURRY LINES OF GOOD/BAD BECAUSE IN THE END EVERYONE HAS A REASON THEY ARE DOING WHAT THEY ARE DOING! In short - I look forward to giving your main story a try. :) As I have said in my previous review (or if I didn't I am saying it now), I love how you set up the previous characters. In fact, you have me so hooked I am currently blowing off writing my own story that I need to update (which I was pumped to write... thanks for that -_- But then again, this seems totally worth it ;)
10/20/2016 c1 Oblivian03
This is good (especially since you say English is not your first language - you write pretty well in it, bar a few grammatical mistakes ;) I love the beginning and the way you have written this. As of yet, I cannot say I am a complete fan of your plot as I wish to know more about it, but you have certainly caught me hook line and sinker and thus far I have enjoyed it and look forward to seeing where it goes. I am definitely a fan of your writing style. At the very last, I am a fan of this segment of story. ;)
My favourite part of this chapter was probably the bits speaking out the Healer child (by the way, were those Norse mythology references I caught? Have you perhaps read a book of a series called 'Magnus Chase' by an author called Rick Riordan? If not, I would recommend it). And as evil as the Abyss is, I love the way you have written it as well. It is perfect. :) As are the other characters (aside from the child, I think I like Moloch the best - although you kind of broke my heart with Zaza...)
This is good (especially since you say English is not your first language - you write pretty well in it, bar a few grammatical mistakes ;) I love the beginning and the way you have written this. As of yet, I cannot say I am a complete fan of your plot as I wish to know more about it, but you have certainly caught me hook line and sinker and thus far I have enjoyed it and look forward to seeing where it goes. I am definitely a fan of your writing style. At the very last, I am a fan of this segment of story. ;)
My favourite part of this chapter was probably the bits speaking out the Healer child (by the way, were those Norse mythology references I caught? Have you perhaps read a book of a series called 'Magnus Chase' by an author called Rick Riordan? If not, I would recommend it). And as evil as the Abyss is, I love the way you have written it as well. It is perfect. :) As are the other characters (aside from the child, I think I like Moloch the best - although you kind of broke my heart with Zaza...)