for A Witch, A Wizard and A Mechanic8/2 c15 ran
very good. prob could do with a few less povs. but quite well written and riveting story. although when i noticed there was only a few chapters left I skimmed most of it, mostly out of frustration that there isn't more and knowing the current pacing meant there was very little plot left.
Usually I prefur the stories to get to the point of the story quicker because of the fact that most are not finished. So if it throws proper romance pacing out the window you get to more story, but meh. did it well other than the fact the slow burn didnt actually ignite
very good. prob could do with a few less povs. but quite well written and riveting story. although when i noticed there was only a few chapters left I skimmed most of it, mostly out of frustration that there isn't more and knowing the current pacing meant there was very little plot left.
Usually I prefur the stories to get to the point of the story quicker because of the fact that most are not finished. So if it throws proper romance pacing out the window you get to more story, but meh. did it well other than the fact the slow burn didnt actually ignite
3/29 c15 Guest
Such a good work. Hopefully you will continue this again sometime or atleast share a summary of how the story would have progressed further.
Such a good work. Hopefully you will continue this again sometime or atleast share a summary of how the story would have progressed further.
7/30/2023 c2 
1DeiOlympi
About your owl AN. Fun fact: in dutch we have this saying... well it's kinda an insult. It's "Uilskuiken" it means Owl chick, and it's supposed to be a politer alternative to calling someone an idiot.
1DeiOlympiAbout your owl AN. Fun fact: in dutch we have this saying... well it's kinda an insult. It's "Uilskuiken" it means Owl chick, and it's supposed to be a politer alternative to calling someone an idiot.
3/15/2023 c15 1Jimbocous
Thanks for another great read so far. Do hope you find your way back to it at some point. This is one of those where Dumbles just has to gt his due, eventually!
1JimbocousThanks for another great read so far. Do hope you find your way back to it at some point. This is one of those where Dumbles just has to gt his due, eventually!
11/22/2022 c15 DarkBan
Aw man, shame you stopped this story.
Yes, i did see that you made a re-writte of it, but toped as well, so still sucks xD
Still, damn nice work on this one, and i'll be reading the other one soon too, thanks for writting and sharing your stories, hope you're doing great :)
Aw man, shame you stopped this story.
Yes, i did see that you made a re-writte of it, but toped as well, so still sucks xD
Still, damn nice work on this one, and i'll be reading the other one soon too, thanks for writting and sharing your stories, hope you're doing great :)
4/25/2022 c15 CarolsSister
Only came across this story recently, but I hope it will be continued. At the very least to see how Dumbletwat reacts should Lily appear at the reading of Sirius' will.
Only came across this story recently, but I hope it will be continued. At the very least to see how Dumbletwat reacts should Lily appear at the reading of Sirius' will.