for Fear Factor10/3/2016 c1 DysshaLaforaya
First, the refrence to Jin as 'An annoying Power-Elite fairy' must be commended. Good Job. (*Applause*)
Second, thanks for writing this! The only thing that might've made better was if Arashiyama had gotten sick. This was still awesome, though. And we both LOVED 'Cat's Cradle.'
First, the refrence to Jin as 'An annoying Power-Elite fairy' must be commended. Good Job. (*Applause*)
Second, thanks for writing this! The only thing that might've made better was if Arashiyama had gotten sick. This was still awesome, though. And we both LOVED 'Cat's Cradle.'
8/1/2016 c1 
16Coffeezilla
Hey...do you feel that?
ITS MY HEART BREAKING YOU BASTARD I MEAN I BARELY CARED ABOUT ARASHIYAMA BUT NOW I NEED TO COMFORT MY SON DAMMIT
16CoffeezillaHey...do you feel that?
ITS MY HEART BREAKING YOU BASTARD I MEAN I BARELY CARED ABOUT ARASHIYAMA BUT NOW I NEED TO COMFORT MY SON DAMMIT
6/21/2016 c1 wakaouji
I've been wanting to read this fanfiction for a while now and I must say I'm really glad I finally got to do that! I love Arashiyama and as much as I love him, I love to torture him more (laughs). He's such a family-man that you can almost imagine his face when he lose his family, especially to Neighbors (I mean, that would be a thousand times worse for him: he actually had the strength to fight them off, after all!) and I really liked the way you write.
A minor problem for me is that I noticed at times you'd call him "Arashiyama", and another time "Jun". I mean, it's probably just me, but... yeah! (For example in one paragraph you have '...Jun could see her expression' and then in another sentence of the same paragraph you wrote 'It gave Arashiyama...') Of course, these are minor nitpicking, so (laughs).
But in any case, I really loved this piece! It really fitted to the Arashiyama I had in mind.
More love to the Idol Captain! Hurray!
I've been wanting to read this fanfiction for a while now and I must say I'm really glad I finally got to do that! I love Arashiyama and as much as I love him, I love to torture him more (laughs). He's such a family-man that you can almost imagine his face when he lose his family, especially to Neighbors (I mean, that would be a thousand times worse for him: he actually had the strength to fight them off, after all!) and I really liked the way you write.
A minor problem for me is that I noticed at times you'd call him "Arashiyama", and another time "Jun". I mean, it's probably just me, but... yeah! (For example in one paragraph you have '...Jun could see her expression' and then in another sentence of the same paragraph you wrote 'It gave Arashiyama...') Of course, these are minor nitpicking, so (laughs).
But in any case, I really loved this piece! It really fitted to the Arashiyama I had in mind.
More love to the Idol Captain! Hurray!