for Legacy Ascending5/8 c6 Vishw
So he had to beat the special Jōnin to be eligible for the Chūnin exam. Right. Well, the writer clearly didn't care how absurd the whole thing was, so, moving on...
So he had to beat the special Jōnin to be eligible for the Chūnin exam. Right. Well, the writer clearly didn't care how absurd the whole thing was, so, moving on...
5/3 c15 Guest
This story is one of, if not the best fiction i’ve read in quite a while. Your pen is impressive, the lengthy updates do the greatness of this fiction along with the many fans a disservice. I with raging emotions however, respect your decision. Just please Keep updating, and hopefully, i pray it can be more frequent. -Jaymar
This story is one of, if not the best fiction i’ve read in quite a while. Your pen is impressive, the lengthy updates do the greatness of this fiction along with the many fans a disservice. I with raging emotions however, respect your decision. Just please Keep updating, and hopefully, i pray it can be more frequent. -Jaymar
4/29 c6 oldpotato
Agree with the other reviews. This chapter makes absolutely no sense.
Imagine if it was Kurotsuchi or Temari that had to be tested. You have all the Kages coming, what would their reaction be if their daughter or granddaughter got failed because Ibiki wanted to ego-trip and forced them to subdue a Jonin just for the privilege to take the Chunin Exam?
The only real way this chapter is anyway believable is if Ibiki was in on it from the start and this whole point was to showcase Konoha's power, but then the Kages aren't even here yet and it defeats the whole purpose.
This was way too contrived and dropped the quality of this story.
Agree with the other reviews. This chapter makes absolutely no sense.
Imagine if it was Kurotsuchi or Temari that had to be tested. You have all the Kages coming, what would their reaction be if their daughter or granddaughter got failed because Ibiki wanted to ego-trip and forced them to subdue a Jonin just for the privilege to take the Chunin Exam?
The only real way this chapter is anyway believable is if Ibiki was in on it from the start and this whole point was to showcase Konoha's power, but then the Kages aren't even here yet and it defeats the whole purpose.
This was way too contrived and dropped the quality of this story.
3/5 c1 elisarobinson92
Every great story" Legacy Ascending
" deserves to be more than just words—it deserves to be seen. Picture your characters brought to life, their emotions captured in every detail, and the action unfolding panel by panel.
I specialize in transforming stories into captivating comics that not only tell your tale but enhance it. Your world, your vision, your masterpiece—I’ll bring it all to life with stunning visuals that capture readers from the very first frame.
Every great story" Legacy Ascending
" deserves to be more than just words—it deserves to be seen. Picture your characters brought to life, their emotions captured in every detail, and the action unfolding panel by panel.
I specialize in transforming stories into captivating comics that not only tell your tale but enhance it. Your world, your vision, your masterpiece—I’ll bring it all to life with stunning visuals that capture readers from the very first frame.
1/20 c15 Guest
I love this, keep up the good work
I love this, keep up the good work
1/19 c1 SilentOmen0
Hi, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your "Legacy Ascending" The title immediately caught my attention, but the story itself went beyond all my expectations. Your storytelling is outstanding, and the characters are incredibly well developed. As I finished reading, I couldn’t help but imagine how amazing this story would look as a comic. The more I thought about it, the more convinced I became that it would shine in that format. A little about me I’m a professional artist specializing in a range of styles, and I work on commission. If you're interested, I’d love to discuss the idea of adapting your story into a comic. Feel free to reach out to me through email, Discord, or Twitter.
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Hi, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your "Legacy Ascending" The title immediately caught my attention, but the story itself went beyond all my expectations. Your storytelling is outstanding, and the characters are incredibly well developed. As I finished reading, I couldn’t help but imagine how amazing this story would look as a comic. The more I thought about it, the more convinced I became that it would shine in that format. A little about me I’m a professional artist specializing in a range of styles, and I work on commission. If you're interested, I’d love to discuss the idea of adapting your story into a comic. Feel free to reach out to me through email, Discord, or Twitter.
Discord: goldendraws
Email:
Twitter: GoldenArtDraws
1/13 c15 Vishw
While I've enjoyed this story in parts and will be following for updates, I request the author to remove Hinata's name from the character list. It's kinda misleading as it made me feel she'd be one of the main characters and on that front, this story disappointed me, especially after her promising introduction...
While I've enjoyed this story in parts and will be following for updates, I request the author to remove Hinata's name from the character list. It's kinda misleading as it made me feel she'd be one of the main characters and on that front, this story disappointed me, especially after her promising introduction...
1/7 c15 Guest
Cool...
Love this episode
And thanks for the time you take in writing this fanfics
Cool...
Love this episode
And thanks for the time you take in writing this fanfics
1/1 c3 ahhh
intiguing
intiguing
12/25/2024 c15 Vinay-kox01
Hey!
I just finished reading your story "Legacy Ascending", and I absolutely loved it! I'd be super excited to adapt it into a comic or animation in my own style. I'm a digital artist and currently open for commission projects. I always aim to deliver work that I think you'd really enjoy, and hopefully, want to share too! My rates are fair, and I make sure the quality is top-notch every time.
If you’re interested, let's chat more I’d love to bring your story to life! You can reach me on
Discord: graphic_gold
Twitter: VKox139175
Instagram: vinaykox1
Hope to hear from you soon!
Hey!
I just finished reading your story "Legacy Ascending", and I absolutely loved it! I'd be super excited to adapt it into a comic or animation in my own style. I'm a digital artist and currently open for commission projects. I always aim to deliver work that I think you'd really enjoy, and hopefully, want to share too! My rates are fair, and I make sure the quality is top-notch every time.
If you’re interested, let's chat more I’d love to bring your story to life! You can reach me on
Discord: graphic_gold
Twitter: VKox139175
Instagram: vinaykox1
Hope to hear from you soon!
12/25/2024 c15 narutoDkurosaki
The sound four killed the hokage's guard team...that's not believable at all whatsoever
The sound four killed the hokage's guard team...that's not believable at all whatsoever
12/22/2024 c15 the god of distruction
the story is well written and while some details can be a bit hard to imagine, its still very interesting and intense enough to keep me engaged...whoever wrote the story has done a good amount of research. I'm now interested in seeing how the rest of konoha reacts to the current position naruto is in and how details like his jinchuriki status and his parents are dealt with by the public, especially leaders of the other villages.
hope to see an update as soon as possible
the story is well written and while some details can be a bit hard to imagine, its still very interesting and intense enough to keep me engaged...whoever wrote the story has done a good amount of research. I'm now interested in seeing how the rest of konoha reacts to the current position naruto is in and how details like his jinchuriki status and his parents are dealt with by the public, especially leaders of the other villages.
hope to see an update as soon as possible
12/19/2024 c6 
2Dscot
I think the chapter was pretty good. I think his fighting skills should be pretty advanced since he was raised by the toad siege. I can’t see him not teaching Naruto properly. I think canon Naruto was kind of dumb not because he himself was stupid but because he was raised poorly. With the early education and development this Naruto should be smarter than Sakura and more powerful than Kakashi when he was his age.
I hope he’s not going to get involved with a snake in the forest. I kinda hope he keeps his distance between the canon comrades and himself. I called them comrades because if people are truly honest with themselves, you could never call team seven friends. Naruto try to be friends they just were friendly to Naruto when it was beneficial to them. I mean, the only reason Sakura was chosen to be a apprentice healer was because she was on the same team as Naruto and Naruto had a crush on her.
2DscotI think the chapter was pretty good. I think his fighting skills should be pretty advanced since he was raised by the toad siege. I can’t see him not teaching Naruto properly. I think canon Naruto was kind of dumb not because he himself was stupid but because he was raised poorly. With the early education and development this Naruto should be smarter than Sakura and more powerful than Kakashi when he was his age.
I hope he’s not going to get involved with a snake in the forest. I kinda hope he keeps his distance between the canon comrades and himself. I called them comrades because if people are truly honest with themselves, you could never call team seven friends. Naruto try to be friends they just were friendly to Naruto when it was beneficial to them. I mean, the only reason Sakura was chosen to be a apprentice healer was because she was on the same team as Naruto and Naruto had a crush on her.
12/19/2024 c4 Dscot
I’m really enjoying your story so far. I kinda hope he doesn’t really interact with canon individuals as much. Personally, I think at least in shipping why does he have to have one girlfriend or multiple at the same time? People usually date break up and date again.
I’ll be honest with you I kind of despise Kakashi Hatake the man taught Naruto one thing tree walking nothing else. Let’s see how many things he taught Sasuke. So I would appreciate him not having such a close relationship with that loser. Personally, I think Guy is a better teacher and person. Forget his quirks he is a dependable and good person to be friend..
I’m really enjoying your story so far. I kinda hope he doesn’t really interact with canon individuals as much. Personally, I think at least in shipping why does he have to have one girlfriend or multiple at the same time? People usually date break up and date again.
I’ll be honest with you I kind of despise Kakashi Hatake the man taught Naruto one thing tree walking nothing else. Let’s see how many things he taught Sasuke. So I would appreciate him not having such a close relationship with that loser. Personally, I think Guy is a better teacher and person. Forget his quirks he is a dependable and good person to be friend..
12/16/2024 c1 Jsmine Lucas
I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Legacy Ascending" and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me alot. I think this is the best story which i never ever read the way you described and the emotions like each and everything is incredible. It's too good would love to hear about your upcoming stories. I'm an artist if you would like to give me a chance to draw some of your characters for your stories or something like coverart for your story so that would be my truly honour to work with you also i'll share some dope ideas with you feel free to dm.
Discord: jasminelucas12
Instagram: jasmineluc_official
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I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Legacy Ascending" and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me alot. I think this is the best story which i never ever read the way you described and the emotions like each and everything is incredible. It's too good would love to hear about your upcoming stories. I'm an artist if you would like to give me a chance to draw some of your characters for your stories or something like coverart for your story so that would be my truly honour to work with you also i'll share some dope ideas with you feel free to dm.
Discord: jasminelucas12
Instagram: jasmineluc_official
Email: