for Playing Pretend6/7/2016 c1 LovelySakura777
This is going to be super awesome. I can tell. I'm so glad there's going to be another James the FIRST x oc story. So few out there. So I'm really happy for this story coming out. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
This is going to be super awesome. I can tell. I'm so glad there's going to be another James the FIRST x oc story. So few out there. So I'm really happy for this story coming out. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
6/7/2016 c1 HappyTerrier
Excellent first chapter with good use of dialogue and descriptions of Sarah mindset. I especially liked her thoughts on wanting to be prefect for a long time and the line you used to show her realizing it wasn't a bad thing.
Excellent first chapter with good use of dialogue and descriptions of Sarah mindset. I especially liked her thoughts on wanting to be prefect for a long time and the line you used to show her realizing it wasn't a bad thing.