for Playing Pretend3/13/2019 c9 Irene
I really loved the whole story, so glad that you decided to continue it! Can’t wait for the update, your writing is great and not overly descriptive which I enjoy. Hope you’re feeling better!
I really loved the whole story, so glad that you decided to continue it! Can’t wait for the update, your writing is great and not overly descriptive which I enjoy. Hope you’re feeling better!
3/3/2019 c9 Guest Reader
Ahhh I really love all of your stories!I'm still hung up on noteworthy boredom lol. I love this, cant wait for the update!
Ahhh I really love all of your stories!I'm still hung up on noteworthy boredom lol. I love this, cant wait for the update!
2/12/2019 c9 Clara
So happy to see an update from you ! Can’t wait to see what is gonna happen with Sarah and James. I have checked your page every day to see if you will b updating, thank you
Cheers from Madrid ! :)
So happy to see an update from you ! Can’t wait to see what is gonna happen with Sarah and James. I have checked your page every day to see if you will b updating, thank you
Cheers from Madrid ! :)
2/11/2019 c9 cosmicforce
At last I have caught up with your latest chapter. Loved the story so far - a very interesting James/OC one. Waiting to read more. Hope you update soon.
At last I have caught up with your latest chapter. Loved the story so far - a very interesting James/OC one. Waiting to read more. Hope you update soon.
2/11/2019 c7 cosmicforce
A chapter with a lot of thinking process going on , I think moving on from the light heartedness of the earlier chapters to more heavier stuff. Good writing. Got to know that Sarah sat with James at the meeting- wasn't too sure at that time.
A chapter with a lot of thinking process going on , I think moving on from the light heartedness of the earlier chapters to more heavier stuff. Good writing. Got to know that Sarah sat with James at the meeting- wasn't too sure at that time.
2/11/2019 c6 cosmicforce
Reading all the chapters at a stretch makes one realise how Sarah has slowly got into James' subconscious. Very interesting read indeed!
Reading all the chapters at a stretch makes one realise how Sarah has slowly got into James' subconscious. Very interesting read indeed!
2/10/2019 c5 cosmicforce
I do hope Sarah and James end up together. Their chemistry is building up well. By the way, who did Sarah end up sitting with?
I do hope Sarah and James end up together. Their chemistry is building up well. By the way, who did Sarah end up sitting with?
2/10/2019 c4 cosmicforce
Love Sarah's feminist attitude. Really like the way you've built up her character. Good work!
Love Sarah's feminist attitude. Really like the way you've built up her character. Good work!
2/10/2019 c3 cosmicforce
Loving the story so far. The fake date ,with hint of true emotions that are likely in the future, was very interesting.
Loving the story so far. The fake date ,with hint of true emotions that are likely in the future, was very interesting.
2/10/2019 c9 Guest
I’m so glad you’re back! Loved the update, can’t wait to see more great writing!
I’m so glad you’re back! Loved the update, can’t wait to see more great writing!
2/10/2019 c9 
2dreaming-of-fireflies
Thanks for updating! I love this story and how you write Sarah- she’s so relatable but endearing
2dreaming-of-firefliesThanks for updating! I love this story and how you write Sarah- she’s so relatable but endearing
2/10/2019 c9 1GiuliaZe
Magnificent as always :D James is starting to get comfortable in touching Sarah even if he is still besotted with Lily. And I think he is feeling quite guilty in putting our dear oc in putting her in a hospital bed... I do wonder what will happen when she does regain her memories. If I were her, I would start thinking about her situation too, because all this fake relationship will just hurt her in the end. Now it is still early but soon she will start to feel trapped... and you know what they say, you don't know what you have till you lose it, right James?
Anyway, I do hope you are getting better :) I'm very happy to see you got back!
1GiuliaZeMagnificent as always :D James is starting to get comfortable in touching Sarah even if he is still besotted with Lily. And I think he is feeling quite guilty in putting our dear oc in putting her in a hospital bed... I do wonder what will happen when she does regain her memories. If I were her, I would start thinking about her situation too, because all this fake relationship will just hurt her in the end. Now it is still early but soon she will start to feel trapped... and you know what they say, you don't know what you have till you lose it, right James?
Anyway, I do hope you are getting better :) I'm very happy to see you got back!