for Potter Club5/3 c60 CuredElfFish
I fear this story is going to turn into a horror show. I would find that very disappointing, but of course an author writes as they choose.
I have enjoyed the humor, the PC, the fix-it, the different paths of some characters like Ron & Lavender, & Draco.
Lucius actually bringing back Voldemort & grossly re-powering the blood Purists however I do not enjoy.
I fear this story is going to turn into a horror show. I would find that very disappointing, but of course an author writes as they choose.
I have enjoyed the humor, the PC, the fix-it, the different paths of some characters like Ron & Lavender, & Draco.
Lucius actually bringing back Voldemort & grossly re-powering the blood Purists however I do not enjoy.
4/16 c60 TyDM
Ch 60... I'm going to be upset if, via Harry's inaction, after all she has done for him and everything he knows about her, some guitar-playing doof ends up with Hermione instead of Harry, simply because he can't be bothered to take her out for a picnic or show her any affection. (I'll be honest... I don't like Ron, and am thankful he is a non-entity in this story. But canonically, he is the only one who put in the time to deserve a shot with Hermione apart from Harry. Hermione is the ONLY girl who has earned Harry's affections canonically (1st life), and Sue in this story re. Harry's 2nd life. ... I would have also accepted Luna as a possibility, especially since she has so much in common with Harry while being so different but also pure, but she has removed herself from the picture for now.
Ch 60... I'm going to be upset if, via Harry's inaction, after all she has done for him and everything he knows about her, some guitar-playing doof ends up with Hermione instead of Harry, simply because he can't be bothered to take her out for a picnic or show her any affection. (I'll be honest... I don't like Ron, and am thankful he is a non-entity in this story. But canonically, he is the only one who put in the time to deserve a shot with Hermione apart from Harry. Hermione is the ONLY girl who has earned Harry's affections canonically (1st life), and Sue in this story re. Harry's 2nd life. ... I would have also accepted Luna as a possibility, especially since she has so much in common with Harry while being so different but also pure, but she has removed herself from the picture for now.
4/16 c59 TyDM
Ch 59... yeah, Amelia pretty much screwed up. Fudge is a selfish person and does not move without self-interest. She should have let Cornelius know that if he failed to "find" the cup and turn it over to the DMLE that he would likely die by having his soul destroyed. As she left things, he had no personal motivation to fight the horcrux corruption and/or return the cup. ...
Ch 59... yeah, Amelia pretty much screwed up. Fudge is a selfish person and does not move without self-interest. She should have let Cornelius know that if he failed to "find" the cup and turn it over to the DMLE that he would likely die by having his soul destroyed. As she left things, he had no personal motivation to fight the horcrux corruption and/or return the cup. ...
3/4 c2 G Fawkes
One chapter in... I think I'm going to pass on this one. Just not in to the pranking thing. Or, at least not as much as this promises. No offense.
One chapter in... I think I'm going to pass on this one. Just not in to the pranking thing. Or, at least not as much as this promises. No offense.
3/3 c1 G Fawkes
'...wasn't sure if Quirrell had Voldemort on the back of his head yet, at this time.' (para)
Uh... Is he wearing the TURBAN?! that's a pretty good sign! Does he smell like garlic?! Does your scar hurt when he turns around. Figure it out! lol!
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Hermione is almost a whole year older than Harry. She met McGonnagall on September 19 last year, and bought her books THEN. She's read them ALL, several times.
'...wasn't sure if Quirrell had Voldemort on the back of his head yet, at this time.' (para)
Uh... Is he wearing the TURBAN?! that's a pretty good sign! Does he smell like garlic?! Does your scar hurt when he turns around. Figure it out! lol!
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Hermione is almost a whole year older than Harry. She met McGonnagall on September 19 last year, and bought her books THEN. She's read them ALL, several times.
1/28 c9 Gnormann
The dialogue of all these children is weird since they all sound like adults. Doesn’t make sense
The dialogue of all these children is weird since they all sound like adults. Doesn’t make sense
1/14 c60 
2SixFtWookie
Going from Umbridge's screams to "I hope you enjoyed" is a little jarring, but the rest of the chapter was a delight. Umbridge though, the schadenfreude isn't doing it for me today.
2SixFtWookieGoing from Umbridge's screams to "I hope you enjoyed" is a little jarring, but the rest of the chapter was a delight. Umbridge though, the schadenfreude isn't doing it for me today.
1/14 c60 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
12/27/2024 c54 Silver Wolf
You missed a good opportunity to pull a master prank...
Harry Potter is to go out to Hogsmeade for the first time. He gets flooded with demands to go out by just about every girl, some of which even strip in class to get his attention, much to his disgust. The day before the visit, he walks in the Great Hall, and using a sonorus spell, claims he's made his pick...All the girls are freaking out as he extends the wait until there's a riot. 'I will go to Hogmeade with... DRACO MALFOY. Nice face, nice hair, and probably nice dick!' Imagine the rest...
Malfoy barely makes it out of the Great Hall alive, and it's not only girls that throw offensive spells. Quite a few boys never thought it was a possibility.
MMMWWWWAAAAH! (evil laugh)
You missed a good opportunity to pull a master prank...
Harry Potter is to go out to Hogsmeade for the first time. He gets flooded with demands to go out by just about every girl, some of which even strip in class to get his attention, much to his disgust. The day before the visit, he walks in the Great Hall, and using a sonorus spell, claims he's made his pick...All the girls are freaking out as he extends the wait until there's a riot. 'I will go to Hogmeade with... DRACO MALFOY. Nice face, nice hair, and probably nice dick!' Imagine the rest...
Malfoy barely makes it out of the Great Hall alive, and it's not only girls that throw offensive spells. Quite a few boys never thought it was a possibility.
MMMWWWWAAAAH! (evil laugh)