for Potter Club8/13/2016 c7 Logical-Tadkins
Awww, Susan's too cute. Good chapter. Like the additions to the group, it'll be interesting to see how they spread the chaos. I would love to see how Harry's friendship develops with Susan and Hermione more! Hope you update soon.
Awww, Susan's too cute. Good chapter. Like the additions to the group, it'll be interesting to see how they spread the chaos. I would love to see how Harry's friendship develops with Susan and Hermione more! Hope you update soon.
8/12/2016 c7 Deliberatee
I just have to ask, ( to save myself from future heartache... and headaches lol) is this H/Hr, H/S?
I just have to ask, ( to save myself from future heartache... and headaches lol) is this H/Hr, H/S?
8/12/2016 c7 
1Arnie1701
Different twist on the Quidditch match, LOL. Poor Harry, falling for the 'puppy-eyes' look.
1Arnie1701Different twist on the Quidditch match, LOL. Poor Harry, falling for the 'puppy-eyes' look.
8/8/2016 c6 Iryelb
I'm not really sure how I feel about all the perspective shifts this chapter, they just seemed kind of unnecessary. Like, if Katie or Susan had been doing anything as opposed to just wishing they could be doing pranks for the Potter Club that would be interesting. I also feel like the best way to make sure the Potter Club doesn't get too wrapped up in the Troll incident would be for them to perform a prank on Halloween, that way people won't be as quick to point the finger, they'll say that the Potter Club was making all the Candles in the great hall pour a ton of orange glitter down on everyone not letting a Troll in, or something.
I'm not really sure how I feel about all the perspective shifts this chapter, they just seemed kind of unnecessary. Like, if Katie or Susan had been doing anything as opposed to just wishing they could be doing pranks for the Potter Club that would be interesting. I also feel like the best way to make sure the Potter Club doesn't get too wrapped up in the Troll incident would be for them to perform a prank on Halloween, that way people won't be as quick to point the finger, they'll say that the Potter Club was making all the Candles in the great hall pour a ton of orange glitter down on everyone not letting a Troll in, or something.
8/6/2016 c1 24The Dark Dragen
What the hell happened to Ron, the first year he stuck next to Harry if they were glued together, so why isn't he doing so now? And ehy is Hermione so close to Harry already, in first timeline she wasn't so close until hollween. And now Susan, I might have missed something in the chapter, but why is she so close to Harry? It was years before she would even talk to him, so why would she decide to do so now in this timeline?
A few things don't add up in this...
24The Dark DragenWhat the hell happened to Ron, the first year he stuck next to Harry if they were glued together, so why isn't he doing so now? And ehy is Hermione so close to Harry already, in first timeline she wasn't so close until hollween. And now Susan, I might have missed something in the chapter, but why is she so close to Harry? It was years before she would even talk to him, so why would she decide to do so now in this timeline?
A few things don't add up in this...
8/5/2016 c6 1dudedorey
This is a wonderful story so far, many super Harry's are incredibly gruff and boring even, what a great way to make connections and help his classmates excel. Keep writing more please. Thank you for the chapter.
1dudedoreyThis is a wonderful story so far, many super Harry's are incredibly gruff and boring even, what a great way to make connections and help his classmates excel. Keep writing more please. Thank you for the chapter.
8/4/2016 c6 Professor McGonagall
Well, it seems that I'm on edge. Kindly publish the next chapter at the soonest possible convenience.
Well, it seems that I'm on edge. Kindly publish the next chapter at the soonest possible convenience.
7/31/2016 c6 Johnjohn
I think Hermione needs to mind her own business
I think Hermione needs to mind her own business