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6/15/2020 c42 Guest
They are planning to become animagi.
It's kinda obvious really.
6/7/2020 c8 6ImUpToNoGood
I am enjoying this! Such an unusual approach.

You asked for constructive comments regarding people being in character; I would encourage you to be extra careful with spelling and grammar when writing professors. It’s a bit jarring when educated characters make grammar errors.

You have Minerva saying: “ ...both her and your father were exceptional students.” Several times so far, you’ve used the object form of a pronoun where it should have been the subject form: “both she and your father were exceptional students.” (To help decide, try it in the singular. If you wouldn’t say “her was an exceptional student” then you also wouldn’t say “her and your father were exceptional students.”)

Hope that helps. I need to go read the next chapter... you’ve got me hooked.
6/5/2020 c46 peggy77
Aww, this was a great story, can't wait to read more of your re-write! Too bad Rowling didn't write it as you have, I would have even liked Dumbledore if she had.

In your new story, it's not going to end in the same spot is it?
6/5/2020 c30 peggy77
Ok, the weird thing about what was said at the trial is that you said that veritiserum had been administered. So, if that was the case, how could Peter lie? When Peter shouted, "That's a lie!" He was lying, which should not have been possible if he had been given veritiserum.
6/5/2020 c10 peggy77
This was a good chapter. I loved Remus and Harry together.
6/5/2020 c7 peggy77
You asked at the beginning if you're getting the characters down and really, we haven't seen much of anyone but Harry, Dumbledore and McGonagall. I mean, we did see Snape and Pomfrey but barely.

The character that feels totally wrong to me is Dumbledore. He acts like he had a personality transplant, lol! In the books, he really wasn't THAT caring towards Harry and I have trouble suspending belief enough to ever believe he would allow Harry to live anywhere other than the Dursley's. But, I will continue reading to see if this somehow becomes believable.

I almost HATE Dumbledore, so yeah, pretty unbelievable to me.
3/31/2020 c46 Guest
Can you make a story in which Harry and Hogwarts watching the fantastic beasts? Please
3/2/2020 c43 2alix33
I hate you with every fibre of my being for every lying and mean syllable you said to Harry, Marge Dursley!
3/2/2020 c42 alix33
Yay! at the prospect of Harry, Hermione, Ron and Neville becoming animaguses.
3/2/2020 c39 alix33
Yay! at Harry, REmus and Sirius having found Slytherin's locket ages earlier than when it was found in canon.
3/1/2020 c35 alix33
IMO Hermione should lend her books containing information for muggleborn witches and wizards to Harry, because he was muggle-raised, so all of that information in those books would be useful and new to him too.
AW, poor Neville!
Excellent ideas, Harry, getting everybosy hot choclate from the house elves in the kitchen and then to go talk to McGonagall about Neville getting his own wand after she's helped convince Neville's grandmother.
3/1/2020 c34 alix33
AW! at Molly Weasley having knitted Sirius and Harry each their own Weasley jumper (British English for "sweater").
3/1/2020 c32 alix33
AW! Bless the Tonks family for taking in their cousin Sirius for a little while while he recuperated from 12 years in Azkaban.
3/1/2020 c31 alix33
IMO Sirius should also receive money to compensate for his 12 years of being wrongly imprisoned in Azkaban.
3/1/2020 c30 alix33
In a world where there is still hunger in so many countries I loathe food fights and reading of them anywhere on the internet with every fibre of my being.
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