2/8/2019 c15 Guest
This fic is a great thing, really. Fleshed out characters, a wild ride of a plot... I really hope that you will continue this eventually. What will happen to girls? The old Guardians? The shapeshifters, the good old hag Nerissa? So many questions...
This fic is a great thing, really. Fleshed out characters, a wild ride of a plot... I really hope that you will continue this eventually. What will happen to girls? The old Guardians? The shapeshifters, the good old hag Nerissa? So many questions...
7/3/2018 c15 Fantastic Fire
(Btw Fantastic Fire is a real account I’m just too lazy to login)
Well that was utterly splendid! Don’t get me wrong, you’re writing of heroes is great, but to me it’s the villains that really pop in this story and I’m obsessed! You’re characterization/character development (including OC) is so professional and just wow! I hope to see more of this story in the future bc it really is “a different kind of story”
(Btw Fantastic Fire is a real account I’m just too lazy to login)
Well that was utterly splendid! Don’t get me wrong, you’re writing of heroes is great, but to me it’s the villains that really pop in this story and I’m obsessed! You’re characterization/character development (including OC) is so professional and just wow! I hope to see more of this story in the future bc it really is “a different kind of story”
7/2/2018 c14 Fantastic Fire
Oh I’m so excited to see what happens next!
Oh I’m so excited to see what happens next!
7/2/2018 c13 Guest
That’s was a lot to take in but it was written wonderfully! I never liked Elyon, I thought she was dumb and I’m glad you’ve changed my mind, she is a compelling villain albeit a fucked up one.
That’s was a lot to take in but it was written wonderfully! I never liked Elyon, I thought she was dumb and I’m glad you’ve changed my mind, she is a compelling villain albeit a fucked up one.
7/1/2018 c12 Fantastic Fire
I’m shook to the very core.. fantastic work!
I’m shook to the very core.. fantastic work!
6/28/2018 c11 Guest
Loved this chapter! Hope the girls get better! I love Cornelia and I love the way you handle everyone’s relationships!
Loved this chapter! Hope the girls get better! I love Cornelia and I love the way you handle everyone’s relationships!
6/27/2018 c10 Fantastic Fire
Somehow your chapters keep topping themselves and it’s great!
Somehow your chapters keep topping themselves and it’s great!
6/26/2018 c9 Fantastic Fire
Holy shit that was intense! It hurt but i loved it!
Holy shit that was intense! It hurt but i loved it!
6/25/2018 c8 Fantastic Fire
Omg that was amazing and emotional and i adored it!
Omg that was amazing and emotional and i adored it!
6/25/2018 c7 Fantastic Fire
Utterly brilliant work!
Utterly brilliant work!
6/24/2018 c6 Fantastic Fire
This literally reads like a novel and I’m obsessed!
This literally reads like a novel and I’m obsessed!
6/22/2018 c4 Fantastic Fire
I wasn’t expecting that! But I’m happy it happened, it’s very intriguing. I loved the long chapter!
I wasn’t expecting that! But I’m happy it happened, it’s very intriguing. I loved the long chapter!
6/21/2018 c3 Fantastic Fire
This is operating on so many levels i can’t stand it! Like are you a professional writer because you are overflowing with talent!
This is operating on so many levels i can’t stand it! Like are you a professional writer because you are overflowing with talent!
6/21/2018 c2 Fantastic Fire
Okay it’s official, i love this story!
Okay it’s official, i love this story!
6/21/2018 c1 Fantastic Fire
I’m loving the vibe your story gives off, its a different tone from the prologue but i like it! Can’t wait to read more!
I’m loving the vibe your story gives off, its a different tone from the prologue but i like it! Can’t wait to read more!