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7/21 c9 Wolfx1120
Aw... I was hoping for more... I so hope you com back to this.
5/8/2017 c1 stubob72556
Any chance that you'll continue this story? I find it intriguing.
12/17/2016 c9 lostman681
damn shame...it looked like it was going to be such a good story. but I know we all have things to do, but I hope that you pick this story up agian sometime in the future
12/12/2016 c1 Mr.FoxTrot1
that's a dick move we were all getting excited
6/28/2016 c2 Kuniklo
(Tell me if this is inappropriate for a review, never used this site before)
You've mistyped Nick as Neck once or twice this chapter. But I like the writing and the references to the DVD extras (and I think another fanwork...?)
One thing brought me out of the story though-the translation bit. To smoothen it out maybe (for future reference) just include the English, perhaps in italics, after each line of dialogue. Particularly if you don't otherwise use speech tags.
6/15/2016 c1 Legion is deaded
*New Hanging Item Unlocked*

Legion hanging from an orbital gun's barrel was injected into your account
6/15/2016 c1 Guest
*New Standing Item Unlocked*

Legion hanging from the orbital gun's barrel
6/15/2016 c1 3Shayu Wolf
v This review is void v
6/13/2016 c1 NO

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