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3/21/2019 c17 Chewy Milk
2/16/2018 c17 Misslieness
Wow, Penny is creeeeeeepy!
2/13/2018 c17 1Nagaichi
2/13/2018 c17 KHARAKI TAKAN
Wow a crazy Penny, kind of want to read some more crazy Penny now. Could totally make that work.

Great chapter.
2/13/2018 c17 Jiore
Holy crap! Penny is really messed up in this one...
2/7/2018 c16 KHARAKI TAKAN
Angrier not angeryer.

This has been a really great read though. A shame it was not Ruby/Cinder though my favorite pairing, Ruby and Blake is up there though.
2/5/2018 c16 Jiore
Good to see you again!

Emerald you trolling genius LOL! but I laughed more when Cinder snipped back at the woman with her child XDDDDDD

*after reading the last part* this oughta be good...good luck cause you're so gonna need it Ruby!
2/5/2018 c16 Domohnta123
Welcome back.
2/5/2018 c16 Misslieness
Nice to see things are moving forward.
1/25/2018 c7 omegazero2718
You kill off Weisscream... YOU MONSTER!
1/23/2018 c15 Domohnta123
You can’t possibly abandon the story now.
9/25/2017 c1 Yubella
so, is this gonna be anothetmr three-way relationship or what?
8/4/2017 c15 LilWhitley
Wow! This is actually one of the best stories I've read so far! Please update soon as possible!
8/3/2017 c15 4Okami The Blue Wolf
Another great chapter, good job! Holy shit Blake and Cinder aren't related at all! That's going to be very awkward later! So what inspired you to make this story in the first place?
8/2/2017 c15 Guest 4
That was an excellent chapter as always! Great twists, but you are missing a few words in the fourth paragraph that are very distracting from the drama. Also, no he has not returned the spear, he has however sent multiple intelligent birds over so I have that going for me.
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