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6/15/2016 c1 77QUEENSPELLER67
1. Orange isn't exactly something I'd wear, but considering the ending, I'll let it slide.
2. That's great that David got a better job.
3. So you have an older sister and you don't know what her job is?
4. So you've got an older brother that does tech product retail? Cool.
5. No, I don't remember what your mom does for a living.
6. That's interesting that your dad works for a temp agency.
7. Okay, I wouldn't have you make me go for a pedicure. I don't even do that IRL. Ergo, my OC doesn't do it either. ...well, Eileen doesn't, anyway...
8. Fair enough that you would lose the bet.
9. I know exactly what nefarious means. It's one of my favorite words.
10. I was hoping to find out how David met Barry and Lucas or did you actually want me to write that story?

Only other thing I have to say: put /QUEENSPELLER67 because that's how you refer to me in other stories, David.
Happy 2 year anniversary, David.

Eagle/Eileen
6/14/2016 c1 6Make FFN Sensible Again
Welcome back.

77 degrees Fahrenheit or 77 degrees Celsius? You have to be specific. I'm aware that the unit in this one-shot is Fahrenheit, but most reviewers are dummies.

-Mach

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