
7/14/2016 c4
7CKRose
I like this story very much. you're doing a good job of filling out these characters. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take us with this.

I like this story very much. you're doing a good job of filling out these characters. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take us with this.
7/11/2016 c4 cruise1213
I love this story. I want to know the questions and answers. Keep us intrigued.
I love this story. I want to know the questions and answers. Keep us intrigued.
7/10/2016 c4 kwarner
Great update, hopefully she can close the case or at least get some answers before the end of the day or a little later.
Great update, hopefully she can close the case or at least get some answers before the end of the day or a little later.
7/9/2016 c1 Theresa471
Good
Good
7/8/2016 c3 Guest
I am still reading and loving the story please keep the chapters coming
I am still reading and loving the story please keep the chapters coming
7/8/2016 c3 TORONTOSUN
I like Holliday. I hope Ryan and Espo doesn't cross her. She seems to be someone you don't cross.
I like Holliday. I hope Ryan and Espo doesn't cross her. She seems to be someone you don't cross.
7/8/2016 c3 Guest
Good!
Good!
7/8/2016 c3
73Shutterbug5269
I could be convinced. This tracks similarly with a few fics I've done in the past.

I could be convinced. This tracks similarly with a few fics I've done in the past.
6/20/2016 c2 Guest
Interesting story, but there are a lot of grammatical mistakes. Maybe having a beta would help.
Interesting story, but there are a lot of grammatical mistakes. Maybe having a beta would help.
6/20/2016 c2 Guest
Minor point: first you say that Beckett will be in ICU for 24 to 48 hours and then you say that they are moving her that night.
Minor point: first you say that Beckett will be in ICU for 24 to 48 hours and then you say that they are moving her that night.