for Black Canary11/5/2019 c14 Guest
Please keep writing
Please keep writing
3/1/2019 c14 
1Curlupanddiebutterfly
Updateee! This is really good, but try to put more detail and longer chappies. Thank youuu.
1CurlupanddiebutterflyUpdateee! This is really good, but try to put more detail and longer chappies. Thank youuu.
2/11/2019 c14 7AbsolutelyAbbie
Wow! This is extremely different than any other MR fan fiction that I've ever read! What a different take on Max, and what a different scenario! High school, cheerleader/crime lord.
7AbsolutelyAbbieWow! This is extremely different than any other MR fan fiction that I've ever read! What a different take on Max, and what a different scenario! High school, cheerleader/crime lord.
5/31/2017 c13 Guest
Pretty good but short and I'm not really sure where it's going?
Pretty good but short and I'm not really sure where it's going?
4/12/2017 c13 16QuestionableIntentions
i like the detail you've included here!
keep up the great work!
love,
baz
16QuestionableIntentionsi like the detail you've included here!
keep up the great work!
love,
baz
2/27/2017 c12 Flowersocks2137
I like your username, Miss Luxe.
Lol, watch me spell it wrong.
You're a pretty good writer though! Better than JP, although at this point in his series anyone can be better than JP...
:)
I like your username, Miss Luxe.
Lol, watch me spell it wrong.
You're a pretty good writer though! Better than JP, although at this point in his series anyone can be better than JP...
:)
2/17/2017 c11 QuestionableIntentions
gas? SHIT!
is this like the concentration camps where the jews were told they were 'taking showers'? I NEED TO KNOW!
please update soon...
love,
baz
gas? SHIT!
is this like the concentration camps where the jews were told they were 'taking showers'? I NEED TO KNOW!
please update soon...
love,
baz
12/13/2016 c10 MutantFreak123
That was great! I loved the cliffhanger! PLEASE UPDATE! Could you check out my new FanFic, On the Run! And tell me how you like it? Thanks! Keep up the awesome cliffhangers!
That was great! I loved the cliffhanger! PLEASE UPDATE! Could you check out my new FanFic, On the Run! And tell me how you like it? Thanks! Keep up the awesome cliffhangers!
12/12/2016 c10 Faxxxx
Wow amazing story! Please update soon!
Wow amazing story! Please update soon!
12/10/2016 c10 Guest
please update soon as the cliff hanger is driving me insane! such a gooc plot and story as well
please update soon as the cliff hanger is driving me insane! such a gooc plot and story as well
12/12/2016 c10 16QuestionableIntentions
hooooooly crap. that was good. and hey, if you're looking for an unofficial beta, pm me, ok?
16QuestionableIntentionshooooooly crap. that was good. and hey, if you're looking for an unofficial beta, pm me, ok?