for Every Life Is Valuable6/27/2016 c1 Lightning The Raptor
While the moral is good, the story itself is rather bland. I can see Ben acting like this, but I don't think of the rest of the aliens talking to him over the other Plumbers, and the tickling scene should have been omitted. It wasn't necessary, the characters don't learn anything, it's filler. Great morale, and believable characters, but sloppy executions.
While the moral is good, the story itself is rather bland. I can see Ben acting like this, but I don't think of the rest of the aliens talking to him over the other Plumbers, and the tickling scene should have been omitted. It wasn't necessary, the characters don't learn anything, it's filler. Great morale, and believable characters, but sloppy executions.
6/20/2016 c1 
2k+GoldGuardian2418
Excellent story, Amiga. And yes, let us not forget those affected in that terrible shooting.
2k+GoldGuardian2418Excellent story, Amiga. And yes, let us not forget those affected in that terrible shooting.
6/16/2016 c1 922newbienovelistRD
SO AMAZING! You did another fantastic job! Thank you, Rosto! Thank you! Thank you!
922newbienovelistRDSO AMAZING! You did another fantastic job! Thank you, Rosto! Thank you! Thank you!