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8/31/2016 c6 1comics-give-me-life
I love this story and Rachel! You write Bruce very in character which can be so difficult. One thing I've noticed is that you switch tenses mid sentence. sticking with one helps the flow of writing and reading.
8/29/2016 c6 kidghost
this chapter was wonderful! I absolutely adore your writing style! i don't really think there's much to change! tyt on updating them because-wow!
8/10/2016 c5 kidghost
I love this story! I hope you can continue!
7/27/2016 c5 Alfred Freedoom Jones
Aww~ She's such a sweet child~
Great chap!
7/20/2016 c4 Alfred Freedoom Jones
This is a really nice story. I really like it and adding in slade and the apprentice stuff is a really nice touch. Please update soon!

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