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7/2/2012 c1 Pika Girl 01
that was a poem ha ha :)
8/25/2007 c1 4Egypt Mesi
That's a great poem. Short, sweet, and sad at the same time. I wish I could write poems like this!

Shelby
11/28/2004 c1 23shrinemaidendarkangel
it was ok.

you had the stanzas off.

it went

a

b

a

c

c

d

d

if the letters are matching, that means that it rymed. if you wanted to make it better, take out the 2 line so the 1 and 3 rhyme
7/28/2003 c1 Hush Puppie
Aw.

Sweet :)
6/1/2003 c1 7blu chocobo
this is a very nice poem! =^_^= *pats Yami's girlfriend on the back*
5/25/2003 c1 Julie
Short but not bad!
3/30/2003 c1 5TemperamentalWriter
waa... sad.. this is good, though. *runs off crying*
2/7/2003 c1 2Bakura Twins
Kawai!

thats cute in JAPANESE!

yay
2/3/2003 c1 Auriliayh
Oh, very nice. Short but sweet. I do like it. And thank you for reviewing my musings. Wanna know something interesting? Our names are very similar. See, mines Salena.
1/26/2003 c1 4speckled-rock
Yeah, this is good...Although it's short, it gets the point across.
1/25/2003 c1 17The-Kurisutaru
K: Kawaii! ^-^ I like it alot!

Yami K: I liked it too!

K: I can't write poetry... I don't know why... anyway... I really like this poem I think you did a great job!
1/25/2003 c1 4DogsruleW
It's good! I like that pairing, though I don't know why. Sometimes I get depressed for no reason too.
1/25/2003 c1 33Difinity
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! SO CUTE! ^_^

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