for I Will Always Love You8/25/2007 c1 
4Egypt Mesi
That's a great poem. Short, sweet, and sad at the same time. I wish I could write poems like this!
Shelby
4Egypt MesiThat's a great poem. Short, sweet, and sad at the same time. I wish I could write poems like this!
Shelby
11/28/2004 c1 23shrinemaidendarkangel
it was ok.
you had the stanzas off.
it went
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if the letters are matching, that means that it rymed. if you wanted to make it better, take out the 2 line so the 1 and 3 rhyme
23shrinemaidendarkangelit was ok.
you had the stanzas off.
it went
a
b
a
c
c
d
d
if the letters are matching, that means that it rymed. if you wanted to make it better, take out the 2 line so the 1 and 3 rhyme
5/25/2003 c1 Julie
Short but not bad!
Short but not bad!
2/3/2003 c1 Auriliayh
Oh, very nice. Short but sweet. I do like it. And thank you for reviewing my musings. Wanna know something interesting? Our names are very similar. See, mines Salena.
Oh, very nice. Short but sweet. I do like it. And thank you for reviewing my musings. Wanna know something interesting? Our names are very similar. See, mines Salena.
1/25/2003 c1 17The-Kurisutaru
K: Kawaii! ^-^ I like it alot!
Yami K: I liked it too!
K: I can't write poetry... I don't know why... anyway... I really like this poem I think you did a great job!
17The-KurisutaruK: Kawaii! ^-^ I like it alot!
Yami K: I liked it too!
K: I can't write poetry... I don't know why... anyway... I really like this poem I think you did a great job!