for Skulduggery P one-shots10/27/2016 c22 SilkySifaka825
I'm pretty sure his name is Larrikin...
I'm pretty sure his name is Larrikin...
9/7/2016 c30 Guest
Hi scarlet it's cara can u do more stories on us please
Hi scarlet it's cara can u do more stories on us please
9/2/2016 c30 
4DetectiveNecro
hey!
I'm really loving your ideas so far and I have some ideas that you might like about future stories! If you would like to know some message me!
DetectiveNecro
4DetectiveNecrohey!
I'm really loving your ideas so far and I have some ideas that you might like about future stories! If you would like to know some message me!
DetectiveNecro
8/11/2016 c21 Snowfrost
I'm still pissed as hell he killed Billy-Ray Sanguine. WHY GOLDEN GOD!? WHYYYYYY!? ;( :( X( :O XO
I'm still pissed as hell he killed Billy-Ray Sanguine. WHY GOLDEN GOD!? WHYYYYYY!? ;( :( X( :O XO
6/29/2016 c4 Snowfrost
Lol ROFL so um did my review for Disharmony show?
Lol ROFL so um did my review for Disharmony show?
6/25/2016 c3 SilkySifaka
Good writing. Keep it up!
Good writing. Keep it up!
6/23/2016 c3 Helping Hand
You really need to work on capitalization and grammar. Names, even nicknames, are capitalized. Use less parentheses, you use them tooooo much, especially in the first chapter. Please also STOP shortening things like tv. Furthermore, I can see that you don't truly have a plan for this... Creation. Try to plan out a storyline instead of all of all of a sudden "look, Valduggery!" Finally, try to mix up your wording! It really helps if you use different word choices, for example; instead of saying 'scared' three times in a row, use terrified, frightened, or nervous. Another part of word choice is not using 'ok' to start three sentences in order.
I mean to write this to help you, so please take this into account when writing, from one writer to the next.
You really need to work on capitalization and grammar. Names, even nicknames, are capitalized. Use less parentheses, you use them tooooo much, especially in the first chapter. Please also STOP shortening things like tv. Furthermore, I can see that you don't truly have a plan for this... Creation. Try to plan out a storyline instead of all of all of a sudden "look, Valduggery!" Finally, try to mix up your wording! It really helps if you use different word choices, for example; instead of saying 'scared' three times in a row, use terrified, frightened, or nervous. Another part of word choice is not using 'ok' to start three sentences in order.
I mean to write this to help you, so please take this into account when writing, from one writer to the next.
6/18/2016 c2 Snowfrost
This is really funny, I have an oc to help you
Name: Margaret Zeld
Code name: Disharmony
Looks: She has black hair with red highlights, red eyes, tan skin.
Sex: female
Age: over a thousand years, looks twenty five.
Outfit: a deep purple, almost black jacket and pants, deep normal purple shirt, and deep blue shoes.
Powers: she has chaos powers, so she is like a goddess, as she can do anything. But she kind of hates it.
Personality: cheerful, insane in a good way, sarcastic, slightly lonely, prankster.
Crush/boyfriend: Bill Ray Sanguine (tanith dumped him instead of him dying, so he found Disharmony.)
Backstory: before the war, she went crazy and tried to take over the world with her chaos powers, but the Elders manage to turn her into stone for a thousand years. She was released by Darquees and became a friend of sorts. She met Sanguine and fell hopelessly in love for him. She was hurt he didn't return the feelings for a while, but when he did it was worth the pain.
Friends: Nye, Sanguin, Skulduggery, Darquees/Valkyrie, China, Thrasher, shudder, Clarabelle
Enemies: A lot. Tanith, Gastly, Scapegrace, Ravel, Vex, Mevelont, etc.
Extra: she has a slight Indian accent
This is really funny, I have an oc to help you
Name: Margaret Zeld
Code name: Disharmony
Looks: She has black hair with red highlights, red eyes, tan skin.
Sex: female
Age: over a thousand years, looks twenty five.
Outfit: a deep purple, almost black jacket and pants, deep normal purple shirt, and deep blue shoes.
Powers: she has chaos powers, so she is like a goddess, as she can do anything. But she kind of hates it.
Personality: cheerful, insane in a good way, sarcastic, slightly lonely, prankster.
Crush/boyfriend: Bill Ray Sanguine (tanith dumped him instead of him dying, so he found Disharmony.)
Backstory: before the war, she went crazy and tried to take over the world with her chaos powers, but the Elders manage to turn her into stone for a thousand years. She was released by Darquees and became a friend of sorts. She met Sanguine and fell hopelessly in love for him. She was hurt he didn't return the feelings for a while, but when he did it was worth the pain.
Friends: Nye, Sanguin, Skulduggery, Darquees/Valkyrie, China, Thrasher, shudder, Clarabelle
Enemies: A lot. Tanith, Gastly, Scapegrace, Ravel, Vex, Mevelont, etc.
Extra: she has a slight Indian accent