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1/5 c98 16ronnambi
I'm glad you are still writing this. And glad to see how Thane's loyalty mission panned out. Thank you.
10/29/2020 c97 Guest
What ever happened to the batarian squad member? Not sure if I just missed his whereabouts in the later chapters or he was just forgotten. Any reason is fine though, this story is in my top all time favorites. Just finished catching up actually and I’m about to just reread it because it’s so good.
10/28/2020 c97 ronnambi
'She simply lay there' and 'practically see the'. Sorry, a little groggy in the morning and saw these. Just thought you would like to see it.

I like how civic minded Nick is, definitely inherited it from Trish. The magpie tendency is definitely from Nikki . And the fact that he likes cake as much as Nikki does is a cherry on top of this sweet chapter.
10/28/2020 c97 flplayer15
Please, include Thane and Samara's story in the next chapter, we're interested!
9/25/2020 c96 The Invisible Pretender
That was a nice, heart warming chapter. Except for the being kidnapped part. I was scared for her.
9/25/2020 c96 ronnambi
Question, whiskey tango foxtrot Nikki?! I was running through a list of possible groups who could be responsible for kidnapping Trish and I was genuinely worried for her and Nick Jr., plus the kind of team Nikki would need for an HRT mission.

Congratulations, you have succeeded in making me so invested in two OC fictional characters that I genuinely feared for their safety.
9/14/2020 c95 shpee101
I’ve gotta say this story is quite well written and I’m really looking forward to the next chapter. Trish is probably the best OC character I’ve ever read and the relationship with Nikki is great. Keep up the good work!
9/1/2020 c95 ronnambi
Good to see you back old friend.

Well at least you beat it!

Good chapter, and an interesting idea about Grunt.
6/8/2020 c94 ronnambi
Well, at least Nikki has Trish and Nick to keep her on the wagon. And this is why I love your story. You humanise them.

Little Nick made friends with a krogan! Aww! Now I want Wrex and little Nick to meet!
5/19/2020 c93 ronnambi
I like the fact that Samara has taken Jack under her wing.

I always hated Project Overlord. especially Archer. David deserved better than that. I'm glad he gets evacuated to Grissom Academy.
4/17/2020 c92 ronnambi
Great to see you and your update!

Trish, you evil minx, stop tormenting your poor Alliance Commander!

Yeah, Jack is always going to be a problem child with authority issues.

And Nikki being her adorkable self around her better half is just the right topping to an enjoyable treat!
3/7/2020 c91 ronnambi
I like Jack's verb form of a child born out of wedlock.

Jack, sweetheart, her childhood best friend/girlfriend/wife has an interesting time keeping up with her. What chance do you have, exactly?

They have fondue nights?! Why wasn't I invited?!

Yay! More Nikki and Trish goodness!

And Samara's loyalty mission went FUBAR pretty quickly. Glad that they rescued Jack so quickly.

Jack and Grunt bonding! And Shepard being overprotective!
2/28/2020 c90 jmeson75
Finally caught up and am liking the personalities you're giving us on Miranda and Samara. And I'm really enjoying Commander Opie. :)
2/22/2020 c90 ronnambi
Well Nikki girl, you should have read the reviews and manual before picking up the Justicar 3000. Though you probably need to get high quality bleach to clean out all the blood stains from everywhere now.

And we get baby Nick, well not cameo, but we do know he is up to causing havoc and leave chaos in his wake. Future special operator right there folks!

And I am slightly glad that the cast of West Side Story never had to deal with space magic knight errant matriarchs of a long lived mono-gendered race. Or we wouldn't have that piece of art now.
2/18/2020 c90 Kalros
Beuatiful morning in Europe with your cool update to my most favourite story. Love it man, keep going. We're still here supporting and waiting!
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