for Silly Songbird4/10 c2 PetrogradAN
The Idea is Great, the SI is an emo robot obsessed with cutting himself and constantly stuck in his own head. Skip.
The Idea is Great, the SI is an emo robot obsessed with cutting himself and constantly stuck in his own head. Skip.
3/27 c1 
1LuminouShadowAlt
Its one of major reasons I dont like read reincarnated into adult type fics. I hate the pretend play shit, the acting. I mean I can understand the reason why its a necessary by my god its such a chore to read. And also cant believe that SIs believe that they can somewhat act like the previous body owner despite having no such experience in their last life.
1LuminouShadowAltIts one of major reasons I dont like read reincarnated into adult type fics. I hate the pretend play shit, the acting. I mean I can understand the reason why its a necessary by my god its such a chore to read. And also cant believe that SIs believe that they can somewhat act like the previous body owner despite having no such experience in their last life.
12/18/2024 c12 Guest
So this literally turned into bible fanfiction
I get that dxd literally rips everything from mythos and religion but like half of this chapter is copy paste from old testament etc. Like sheesh, inspired does not mean equals to.
So this literally turned into bible fanfiction
I get that dxd literally rips everything from mythos and religion but like half of this chapter is copy paste from old testament etc. Like sheesh, inspired does not mean equals to.
10/31/2024 c1 1118fernal
You said mc is an idiot savant, yes?
what branch of magic will he specialize in?
You said mc is an idiot savant, yes?
what branch of magic will he specialize in?
9/6/2024 c5 Guest
Its Dogshit, do not bother.
Its Dogshit, do not bother.
5/23/2024 c2 Guest
I have no words to say, especially negative ones, it's smooth well crafted, I dare to say flawless
I have no words to say, especially negative ones, it's smooth well crafted, I dare to say flawless
5/21/2024 c18 Fungod
This was a fantastic story while it lasted.I haven't seen your profile yet so I don't know if you have other stories up, but I look forward to checking it out.
This was a fantastic story while it lasted.I haven't seen your profile yet so I don't know if you have other stories up, but I look forward to checking it out.
4/3/2024 c18 insanecoop
Verbal diarrhea splashed out over 18 chapter to an unfinished plot.
Don't bother, no seriously, don't.
You'll waste 5 hours on a washed up story like I just did and think, why did I bother.
Verbal diarrhea splashed out over 18 chapter to an unfinished plot.
Don't bother, no seriously, don't.
You'll waste 5 hours on a washed up story like I just did and think, why did I bother.
2/15/2024 c2 Guest
dropped... too much blah blah blah and its only ch 2
dropped... too much blah blah blah and its only ch 2
12/10/2023 c1 gshev120
With all due respect, what is bro yappin about. I was hoping this story would be great. It started out so strong. One of the best premises I've seen in the dxd fanfic realm. But after the rating game, what the fuck happened? Feels like half the story is just us reading about risers inner monologue and scheming. 50% of the time it makes no fucking sense and the other 50 its boring as hell. It feels like the chapters never make it past the rough draft stage before they are posted. Hell, not even past the outline. The plot is convoluted beyond my comprehension and it completely ruins it.
With all due respect, what is bro yappin about. I was hoping this story would be great. It started out so strong. One of the best premises I've seen in the dxd fanfic realm. But after the rating game, what the fuck happened? Feels like half the story is just us reading about risers inner monologue and scheming. 50% of the time it makes no fucking sense and the other 50 its boring as hell. It feels like the chapters never make it past the rough draft stage before they are posted. Hell, not even past the outline. The plot is convoluted beyond my comprehension and it completely ruins it.
10/11/2023 c4 VamPyr00
Sorry, but that was just fucking dumb. Why is he doing the same shit as Canon Riser? That makes no sense at all. The world is already irrevocably changed, so there is no point at all in acting like that. He should have just called off the stupid engagement and ignored Rias and her peerage entirely. Everything about that situation is just an utter waste of time.
On another note, the fact that he was practically defeated by his own bishop, despite having such OP magic at his disposal, is pathetic.
Sorry, but that was just fucking dumb. Why is he doing the same shit as Canon Riser? That makes no sense at all. The world is already irrevocably changed, so there is no point at all in acting like that. He should have just called off the stupid engagement and ignored Rias and her peerage entirely. Everything about that situation is just an utter waste of time.
On another note, the fact that he was practically defeated by his own bishop, despite having such OP magic at his disposal, is pathetic.
10/11/2023 c3 VamPyr00
First off, incest is wincest :D.
Secondly, I really hope that the MC isn't actually trying to be with Rias. Who would want to be with a girl that so easily gives in to the whims of a pervert (like Issei)? She basically seduces him into doing whatever she wants by showing off her body...definitely not waifu material. She's kind of a slut...in fact, most of the girls from DxD are...
Also, I really hope the MC isn't always so scatter-brained... To use TIME MANIPULATION just to have an internal monologue is pretty dumb. I hope he can channel some of his insanity into making himself OP.
Finally, couldn't he just put himself to sleep with a spell? That should be like, really easy compared to time manipulation and teleportation.
First off, incest is wincest :D.
Secondly, I really hope that the MC isn't actually trying to be with Rias. Who would want to be with a girl that so easily gives in to the whims of a pervert (like Issei)? She basically seduces him into doing whatever she wants by showing off her body...definitely not waifu material. She's kind of a slut...in fact, most of the girls from DxD are...
Also, I really hope the MC isn't always so scatter-brained... To use TIME MANIPULATION just to have an internal monologue is pretty dumb. I hope he can channel some of his insanity into making himself OP.
Finally, couldn't he just put himself to sleep with a spell? That should be like, really easy compared to time manipulation and teleportation.
10/11/2023 c2 VamPyr00
Pretty strange way to go about 'explaining' his new personality. Without any knowledge of Riser's life, he would have probably been better off going with partial memory loss or something. Nevertheless, this seems to have turned out alright, even if by sheer luck.
On another note, the magic system seems completely broken. I look forward to see how OP he can get in a short amount of time.
Pretty strange way to go about 'explaining' his new personality. Without any knowledge of Riser's life, he would have probably been better off going with partial memory loss or something. Nevertheless, this seems to have turned out alright, even if by sheer luck.
On another note, the magic system seems completely broken. I look forward to see how OP he can get in a short amount of time.